Yay, I like this story a lot! I like the way you spaced it as well, the chapter are short but the paragraph's are just long enough. It's very well written.

However, in the beginning paragraph's of chapter 1, it should probably say Russia is Kai's home country, not his home town. Also, I think "soiled himself" sounds like, he, well, crapped his pants.

I don't mean to sound critical. I

yaay thank you for updating! Please contineu! I'd love to see Kai sober! (maybe even with a huge hangover hehe)

I'll be waiting for you!

And sorry I'm a little late, but Merry Christmas to you!

beautiful! I sure wouldn't like this to be a one-shot, so update kay? :) I love it so far.

aw! so gud! it made me cry!

byez!

kavbj