|Reviews for Wishing you were Sober|
| Lost in Purple 12/29/07 . chapter 2
Yay, I like this story a lot! I like the way you spaced it as well, the chapter are short but the paragraph's are just long enough. It's very well written.
However, in the beginning paragraph's of chapter 1, it should probably say Russia is Kai's home country, not his home town. Also, I think "soiled himself" sounds like, he, well, crapped his pants.
I don't mean to sound critical. I
| vlissan 12/27/07 . chapter 2
yaay thank you for updating! Please contineu! I'd love to see Kai sober! (maybe even with a huge hangover hehe)
I'll be waiting for you!
And sorry I'm a little late, but Merry Christmas to you!
| vlissan 12/7/07 . chapter 1
beautiful! I sure wouldn't like this to be a one-shot, so update kay? :) I love it so far.
| Kavbj 12/6/07 . chapter 1
aw! so gud! it made me cry!