not bad for a first try!

Yay! Somebody else likes POTO too! I'm practically obsessed. Very interesting poem. I wish I was capable of writing like that...

That was beautiful. Such sincerity and empathy in your words.

Not since Lloyd Webber have I heard or read anything that remotely captures the compassionate feeling of Erik and Christine's relation. Your writng was an absolute perfect depiction. Loved it!

lovely.

continue to write

That was wonderful! Right more like i beg of you!

:*( ::tear for Erik:: Good rhyming... ah, poor Erik.