Oh goodness. At first I hated/pitied Axel and then Roxas and...:tears up: It was beautifully written and depressing and the very definition of angst.

*sighh* I love happy endings <3
My favorite part will always be the part when Roxas remembers Axel's words, and fills in the silences. Just simply amazing.
I knew that Roxas was the main character as soon as I read the "dirty little secret". Honestly, there is no way for Axel to be little :)
Awesome story, btw ;)

OMA THAT WAS SO GOOD im amazed when i read your ending i was overjoyed at how it turned out mybe you can write a zemyx one if you havent already

umm...that's short. it was...no, it had...almost no suspense at all. but i think the idea's quite creative. xD though i can never look Roxas as an outcast. at first i went, 'oh, who's the outcast!? is it Roxas? it can't be...but Axel!? impossible..' i went nuts, so to say. xD

i always love a protective Axel. -sighs dreamingly- makes me want to take him away from Roxas. but they're too cute and sweet together. so i didn't. lol. xD bu anyway, i like it!

the only reason i feel lost is because my brain is off a bit.

i likey. *clicky the fav box* hmn time to skip to another storry.

have a nice dayz!

gorgeous.
I don't know what words to describethis story!
I was a bit wary in the middle when it got so extreme,
but it was well written and beautiful.
Not many writers make the decision to end where you did, and I love it this way!
Cheers~

Generally, I have to say its a good story, I got lost a few times >< but that may only be because Ive been staring at the computer scene for a couple (under stated) hours! So, I just read all six chapters, and I have to ask: Is there going to be more? I hope so. lol anyways good job! And hope you'll think about continuing, if your not already. :)

it finished?
love it i dont mind if it took a year
nope not at all
i wonder if the blond dude was Demyx who was it
anyway i think that it was a bit rushed at the end but i still love it

OMG OAO I NEVER THOUGHT IT'D COME SO SOON *A*
"I love you."
"Are you... serious?"
"Then kiss me."
I love the bluntness of it all. I don't think it wouldn't have felt right if Roxas did a lot of talking or anything. So yea. Glad you did that.

"Roxas?"
"Are you... real?"
"Let me show you..."
Those parts were my favorite :heart:


Fvckilovehowthisended. @w@
FAVED.

yay! nice kiss scene, btw

D'aw, I'm glad that the ending was so sweet! ^^

All I can say is...

Year well spent!! XD; It was very good, I liked it a lot.

*imagines a flushed roxas with a come hither look saying "let me show you"-nose bleed ensues* I think there needs to be an epilogue with lost of smex >.> and also...how can you not like cake?!
Anyway, good fic bless them both also damn your aptitude for overly romantic mushy scenes *had to skip the english class part* Anyway..i'm prepared for it this time so i'm gunna go back and read it after i send this. Till next time o/ *hits 'submit review'*

FVCK. GROW SOME, AXEL. FVCKING.. ARGH. *facekeyboard* These chapters are entirely too short ;A; But I'm ridiculously happy that you're still writing this x3
Besides, I know never to underestimate short things...like me. lol. ANYWAYS, despite its length, the contents made up for it. EVEN MOAR DRAMA OAO WHATEVER THE HELL COULD AXEL MEAN?! HEARTLESS?! DX
owae;ijglskaweoisdjfasIcanhardlywaitforthenextchapter
Oh yea and I really love how you write Roxas. x'D He even sounds bleak when he's floating on cloud 9!
"I'd been fvcked up pretty good this time. Or pretty bad"
"My heart was hurting. Or bursting. Whatever."
Those four sentences with completely different meanings for the words on their own, but mean the same thing when used a certain way made me :D

*Sniffles* Poor Roxy, Axel deserved him shouting at him for not standing up for his best friend! Jerk! Even though this story is sad so far, I hope that it has a happy ending! Please!