Too many cliffhangers! 0_0

hey :D first, i just want to say i love your story :) i love this one better than 'Mischeif Managed'. The getting together is all good, but when they leave Hogwarts and actually have to fight in the war, i think that really highlights what James and Lily mean to each other. I've been having a pretty rough time and surprisingly, reading fanfiction makes me feel better! especially stories about James and Lily. I've been looking all over for a GOOD one and i havent found any T_T and then i found this story :) and this story seems so tragically real and so 'James and Lily' that i fell in love with it! i noticed that you haven't updated in a long time. I really wish you would. Becuase this story means something to me and i really want to read the end :D there's still so much to be told, like their wedding, Peter, Remus and how Voldemort is eliminating the order etc. So i really want to encourage you to keep writing and updating! ive never wanted a story updated this badly! it would mean so much to me to read this story until the end, and i know it would mean a lot to your other readers too :D


congratulations again for starting a great story :) please, please, PLEASE do update!

'James knew (and knew she knew) with resignation that he couldn’t do romantic if he tried, but strangely this seemed all right, that he was an eternally bumbling fool for her… and just maybe she was just a bit of a fool for him too, sometimes'
this is my favourite line so far :D classic and so true. it sums up James and Lily perfectly!!
i love this story! and i love your characters. even Peter! it will be very interesting to keep on reading and see what happens to them next. with voldemort and the order and the war and peter's betrayal and everything!
the life and death situation is becoming more intense! i love it! good job :D
i will just go on to read the next chapter! just have to compliment you for that line :)

Can u please update sometime soon if possible? Thanks, B

Hey. Great story! i love how you've carried it on from the prequel :) keep writing and update soon! x

So climatic ! PLEASE UPDATE D':

this is really good! please update soon!

I loved that chapter! It was really good.
I can't wait to see what happens next.

I have enjoyed the other pieces of yours that I have read, so thought I would try this one. Oh my goodness! Lots of surprises, from a Christmas tree on fire to an engagement! And Snape included. Fun! Favorite line: "Her green eyes were a wide, flickering reflection of the burning tree behind him." I can visualize a fresh, youthful Lily surrounded by fiery chaos. Cool! :-)

awesome update as always! and a cliffie to boot! please update asap! i cant wait to read more!

What a wonderful update! As usual, I loved it :) I really enjoy how you switch back and forth between flashbacks and the present time--it makes things so much more interesting and it also makes me curious why you're telling us that information.

You are definitely one of my favorite Lily/James writers!! The way you make everything flow together so perfectly is what makes your stories so good! Thanks so much for writing them :)

Looking forward to the next update!
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YAY!! you updated! loved the chapter...the part with Snape's mum wasnt much clear to me...but loved it nonetheless.also do write about Emm and Sirius...i think they're cute.plz update soon!!

Oh... I hardly know where to begin. This universe you've created ... the flashbacks combined with the "present"... the characters I love but only feel like I really know after reading this... just wow. My favorite part, of course, was Sirius and Emmeline Vance and not even for the conversation between them, necessarily but for James's explanations and obvious concern for his friend. I love how well he knows Sirius and that he'd obviously hate himself for telling her what he did. I love how James tries to protect Sirius.

Basically, I loved so much about this, but I'd be typing forever if I went into anymore specifics. Suffice it to say that this story is incredible. I can't wait for the next installment. (I will say, though, that I loved how you included Andromeda.)

love it..

I really like this fic. I haven't read many about the first Order but this makes me want to read more. A few particular things caught my attention:

“Not the batwings, Potter you idiot!” - I thought there should be punctuation between 'Potter' and 'you' because I had to read it twice to get the pause in the right place. I also didn't quite see how this flashback fitted to start with but once I realised why you included it it did seem to fit.

I'd never thought about Crouch Sn wanting his son's house changed but it does make sense. Well done for thinking about it.

You've left it on a really good cliffhanger - enough to keep interest but not so much that everyone wants you to write the next chapter immediately.