Oh, this HURT. Hiro's loss of innocence is a neccessary but painful plot point for the second season, and you've captured that beautifully.

It's very, very beautiful.

It's still the Hiro from the first season that I thought almost lost, but with the evolution of the second one... you make me love him a lot more, really. All these relationships are described so well, and yeah, you remember Charlie, I loved her so much...

Very well written. I loved the images and the way you invoked all the senses (sight,sound, smell, touch) to tell the story. I also liked your ending and wouldn't mind seeing it come true. Good job!

o...m...g... that was amazing, i think that the unique writing style was good. and i hope to see more, and if not then thats ok too. just keep up the good work.

Oh, Hiro and Flying Man...one more reason to mourn the passing of Nathan Petrelli. :(