Reviews for Letters From Hell

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God of Laundry Baskets 2008-05-01 ch 4,	abuseAw T_T Poor Chrono! I really hope he gets to see Rosette soon, they deserve eachother T_T. Please update ASAP. Haha, I will anxiously await to find out what happenes to our heros~
IchikoKitsuneKoumori 2008-04-21 ch 4,	abuseWHAT THE ! AION IN HEAVEN! THAT IS UP!
MercedesRavenAngelous 2008-04-17 ch 4,	abuseA very good story indeed. I like the way it's written, even though it jumps around quite a bit with no solid distinguisher between scenes. Otherwise, the idea is great. Still can't figure out how Aion ended up in Heaven, but at least now I understand how Chrono ended up in Hell. Very well written, and I can't wait for more!
OtherCat1 2008-04-16 ch 4,	abuseYou might want to think about seperating your scenes with line breaks. There was what looked like flash backs mixed in with the current story line, and there really aren't any natural segues between your scenes. You also need more show, and less tell. Which is too say you're a little too spare on the worldbuilding, and you're going by so quickly from point to point that everything is a blur. (Granted, this is just my perception, as you've bazillions of reviews, and no else one has pointed this out.)
PaCT 2008-04-15 ch 4,	abuseYeah, the re-entrance of Gray and Golden! And, I assume, Chrono's in heaven! But...I'm confused. Why is AION a high counciler(did I spell that right?)? How'd he even get GET into heaven when CHRONO was in hell? And now, now I don't know who's the good guy and who's the bad guy! All in all, a WONDERFUL chapter! Update!
Lycoris Calantha 2008-04-15 ch 4,	abuseVery nice! Um, what do the boxes that seem to appear at random intervals mean? Now really... Temporary halos? I would really have never thought about it. Tzi's funny, though... I like elevators too! And I read an interesting collection of elevator jokes I wish I could try... (I don't have the guts)
Moonlight Fire 2008-04-15 ch 4,	abuseAnd just when I think your writing can't improve, it does! The flow was wonderful. The plot was addictive. The story itself was completely believable... I love it! This may be my favorite chapter (of this) that you've written so far! I can't wait to read more (who is Lucky, what was Godren doing in the beginning, and why is heaven trying to destroy itself?), and I can only hope you'll update soon! ^ ^
Bella-Rose 2008-04-15 ch 4, anon.	abuseThis seems really good so far.It's very intriguing. Update quickly, i really wanna know what this mission is all about. And why the hell Aion is in heaven, and why chrono isn't, that sure was messed.
IchikoKitsuneKoumori 2008-03-24 ch 3,	abuseHey could you show an example of the code writing?
Diabolical Kitsutora 2008-03-14 ch 3,	abuseI like that last part, about the telephones, that was great. You may want to reread it to find spelling and grammar mistakes. Even if you have Microsoft word, errors can still escape you. Like my teacher has told me and I tell everyone else, it can be the right spelling for a word, but the wrong word. Anyways, good chapter, I can't wait for the next one!
Bella~Rose 2008-03-09 ch 3, anon.	abuseThis is really good. I like your perception of God, very kewel, i have always had this theory of God, if it did exist, that God wouldn't have a gender like the angels (their either feminin or masculine) but could change his/her form at will. I like how Heaven can be corrupted and that Rosette is a lawyer of sorts, it's very interesting. I'm really enjoying reading this.
PaCT 2008-03-06 ch 3,	abusegod, a teenage girl?! I love it (you'd never expect it!)! I'm so glad you updated so quickly! I hope the next update is just as fast!
OtherCat1 2008-03-05 ch 3,	abuseMay I suggest to you "Captain Stormfield's Visit to Heaven" by Mark Twain? Or "Letters from the Earth" and "The Mysterious Stranger" by the same author?
SaronCalamore 2008-03-05 ch 3,	abuseI'm really enjoying this story. I can't really think of any others like it, and that's what makes it so enjoyable. Keep up the great work!
Olynara Sedai 2008-03-04 ch 3,	abuse... AH!... Chrono!...You little genius you! Well, that didn't mean overmuch. (my comment, not your chapter) Any who, I love the characters you've created, Chrno's possie, each with their individual traits, and Rosette's fledgling group -so far she seems to hold them differently to Chrno. They're there because she's the type who attracts people, who want to have fun with her, while Chrno's friends are there due to the adversity they all face. But in the end, they're all their to do one thing: keep Chrno and Rosette from going insane without eachother. Well, this episode seems to have been mostly about the friends, next time we'll talk about Chrno's Letters! What do they mean? Where will they go? Do any of Rosette's reach him? That's next in: Reviews Even Olynara Can Understand! P.S That's a CC Anime joke, Azmaria has shorts called A Chrono Crusade Lecture Even Az Can Understand. Much love! mwah!

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