I like this story very much! Update?

Well written and captures the moments well. My favourite bit was when the giraffe wailed in fear at the thought of the christmas cake not arriving on time; classic!

:D
awesome!

wow
ALL of the chapters are AMAZING!
this is one of the best LOST fanfics ive read
update soon please!

yay!
you finally updated

it was great as usual

update soon

If I knew that crash-landing on this spit of land would mean waking up to this in the mornin, then I would have not yelled so loud as it went down."- Aha, good Sawyer line ;)

Charlie and Melanie need a make-up kiss!
Update soon.

Aw, loving this story. I love how Melanie had to complete opposite expirence as Locke after crashing... loosing her legs instead of getting them.
And I can't help but be jelous of Melanie for all the Charlie action! lol

Love it so far!

UPDATE PALEASSEE!

i check this fanfic everyday to see if u updated yet
and i just ...
please
this is my favourite LOST fanfic and im really impatient right now
lol
please and thnxx =]

heyy!
post new chapters PLEASE!
this is the best LOST fanfic i have ever read ever!
thnxx
great story!
=]

"No, leave me alone. You're a junkie and you never told me and you HATED me ALL ALONG and you never TOLD ME!" I turned and ran back to the caves, and then back to the beach, leaving Charlie to his thoughts.- No! Oh, but this could all be solved with Charlie making it up to Mel. Yay! Picnic on the beach...romantic walk ;)

'Sighing, I walked to my own tent, packing up my things and moving to pitch next to Hurley's tent, as he was my only friend now.'- Aw, Hurleys a good and funny friend to have though.

Charlie! :D
Love it so far!

"Me and him had a talk the other day. He was saying that...that you've been clingy. He said that ever since he saved your life, since the crash, you've been depending on him for everything and that you'd not let him alone for a moment to catch his breath..."- Ohh, i think Claires causing trouble for Melanie and Charlie.

And Charlie had a hell of a lot of explaining to do.- I think Claire has a lot of expaining to do ;) becuase it cant be true, they kissed!

wow! i love your character... maybe you can do a story for my character too... yahoo message me if you want to...

Awesome! I love Lost stories with original characters- it's so easy to actually picture, because there's so many survivors we don't know anything about. I love how Melanie calls Sawyer "Hot Guy"... Great job!