Reviews for Law and Disorder

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Molloy 2008-06-30 ch 6,	abuseOne of the unexpected delights of this chapter is how it fleshes out DNAmy, the most neglected villains in the KP Rogue Pantheon. Even in terms of the show’s creators, the mad geneticist gets the short-shift. However, she has so much potential. Too many fanfics, when they mention her it is usually to illustrate a trite, unfunny “fat joke.” Here she becomes a character, a person. Whether she has any bearing on how this sitch plays out for Kim, it is nice to see her given a measure of respect. As always, your dialogue really shines—the concluding scene between Kim, DNAmy and Tiny was excellent. I also liked this mainly non-dialogue driven moment: “It was then that Kim and Tiny noticed that the prisoners and guards were now all huddled close to the table. ‘Hello!’ Kim snapped. ‘Nosy much?’” Tiny is starting to feel like a canon character—which further demonstrates your mad dialogue fu in that almost one hundred percent of what the reader knows about her comes from what she says. This was a very nice Shego and Drakken moment: “’Devising my greatest plan yet!’ he crowed. ‘Don’t you think you should set the bar a little higher?’ She gibed.” I really liked how you played the complex emotions between Ron and Kim in this one. After that litany of “signs” of her closeness to Ron, Kim is still able to see him as only a friend. This isn’t the formidable denial skills that Tiny references later in the scene. I really believe Kim when she says/thinks “None of which meant she like-liked Ron.” If you don’t believe you romantically love someone, you don’t. Of course, when she says that best friends kiss on the cheek all the time, she is living in a dream world. I am really interested to see how this plays out. Although I can’t imagine Ron not doing something goofy at trial (section VII definitely shows that a 300 IQ hasn’t changed him in any essentially Ronnish kind of way), I am really looking forward to him busting his cousin.
Michael Howard 2008-06-29 ch 6,	abuseI wasn't expecting Kim to be doing any mental re-evaluating of her relationship with Ron in this story given the current circumstances but that's always fun to watch. And once again you have captured Barkin, Drakken, and Shego like you were their original creator. Great stuff!
Michael Howard 2008-06-29 ch 4,	abuseAnother excellent chapter here. I love the way you take full advantage of the large and entertaining cast of characters in the KP Universe.
Michael Howard 2008-06-29 ch 2,	abuseBarkin was in fine form here but the best line in the chapter appears below: "The book, like most every other one they’d been reading in class, was pompous, boring, and, worst of all, picture-free." And the law firm Mr Dr P was calling at the end, do they perhaps have a branch office in Harvard Square, Cambridge?
Michael Howard 2008-06-29 ch 1,	abuse“May I use he Kimmunicator?” Left off a 't' there. Well, I could be petty here and bring up the legal concept of criminal intent, or point out how difficult it would be for a known super-villain to approach a law enforcement agency even to swear out a complaint. But I'm not going to do anything like that. If I let logic decide what stories I read or watch, I'd never have gotten started on Kim Possible to begin (shudder). This was a great begining and gives every indication of being a very entertaining story.
Samurai Crunchbird 2008-06-24 ch 6,	abuseMrDrP, This was yet another great chapter...although I am just a little hurt about being slighted for mention in the list of Chapter 5 reviewers. Kim is making a great set of friends 'on the inside'. In fact, when I heard Tiny's story, it made me think she was planted there to 'watch KP's back' behind bars. Ron is making excellent progress in helping Kim. His mind, however, will probably be too full of courtroom knowledge to be much use on his date. Still, it was a nice way to end the chapter with that question from Tiny. Still your friend in writing, regardless of recognition (or lack thereof), The Samurai Crunchbird
TexasDad 2008-06-22 ch 6,	abuseSo, when do you rename this Kim Possible: Criminal Intent? It's interesting to see that Kim has better coping skills in prison than she does when dealing with the food chain. It must be a new personal low for Kim, taking relationship advice from DNAmy. MrDrP is once again faithful to the series by showing Kim is really just your basic average girl when it come to Ron. Just as in the series, Kim is at a total loss when dealing with their relationship. All the adults see it for what it is and probably most of her friends do as well, but not the stubborn Miss Possible. Chief Justice Ronald Dean Stoppable, kind of a nice ring to it, and scares the pookie out of me at the same time.
Danny-171984 2008-06-21 ch 6,	abuseGood darn question Tiny, good question. I bet Kim is going to have a sleepless night. She better! As for Ron, he is a freaking cheater. He cheated...but he did it for a good cause. He is not the smartest guy around...dependable but not very smart. I do hope that Ron will not become the next Supreme Chief...that would be bad...Anyways, until next time. Danny
RonHeartbreaker 2008-06-21 ch 6,	abuseFun chapter. Loved the scene with Dementor on Good Morning Middleton! I'd been wondering why we don't see more cameos by Sturgis in recent fanfics, and this one was inspired. The DNAmy-Kim interactions were also excellent.
acosta perez jose ramiro 2008-06-20 ch 6,	abuseTiny seems like a nice girl... even if she's a criminal. Great job with Kim and Ron, as always. Keep the good writing.
acosta perez jose ramiro 2008-06-20 ch 5,	abuseVery good one! So, Kim doesn't have a bully but a fan... hilarious! Great chapter, as alwsys. Keep the good writing.
noncynic 2008-06-20 ch 6,	abuseWell,well, Kim getting lovelife advice from her fellow inmates? And giving away the 'obvious-to-all-but-her' so quickly. And Ron leaving confusion in his wake, as usual. He may get Kim off, but then may need to explain a few things to the people he's rushing past. Wonder how he handles a date with a 300 IQ? Still expect Drakken's ego to be a key to Kim's freedom, but that may be obvious. Keep up the great story.
Quathis 2008-06-20 ch 6,	abuseFun chapter, especially with DNAmy thrown in. Would this alter Gorrila Fist any? DNAmy might ask a fellow cuddler for help. . . Ron's scenes were also fun to read. I got a good laugh about the Chief Justice bit. Psychological warfare in checkers- brutal.
Josh84 2008-06-20 ch 6,	abuseWell, it looks like Ron's plan is working... so far. There's still the bar exam on Saturday, but not before his date with Tara on Friday. Hope he can pull this off. With Kim in prison, the villains on the outside are taking full advantage and having the time of their lives. So, Kim has found a couple people she can confide in, and now she's in confusion over her current (friend) relationship with Ron. Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Drakonis Aurous 2008-06-20 ch 6,	abuseAnother great chapter. Now Kim's having to deal with DNAmy as a fellow "cuddler". Nice touch to show Dementor gloating on a talk show... ""Right. And someday I’m going to fall madly in love with a villain!" Barkin said." - hilarious! Drakken and Shego seem adjusting well to Kim's incarceration almost being lax about the villiany game. The prison scene was interesting and it looks like the first of the misfortunate events are turning around. And hints of Kim's feelings for Ron are slowing coming to light even Kim is unwilling to admit it. So things are starting to fall in place. Most eagerly awaiting to see how they do... - Drakonis Aurous

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