Nice, the way you implied like they were Oma and ol But I ask you this,Is Zuko going to die?

Awesome... I loved the story, and especially how Zuko thought it had a happy ending. So did I, in fact, but the ending was so tragic... Leaves you wondering what's in store for these two. Great job!

nice

This was a really good story. Very sad in a way, but good. I like Katara's version of Oma and Shu's story. You are a really talented writer. Most people struggle to write in the tense that you did, but you accomplished it. I'm faving this story!

Nicely done.
I felt like melting at the end. :)