Wow this is good

Sweet i like it. Keep it up dude. just make it longer also do you have microsoft word?

I liked it! I cant wait till chapter 8!


















































































































































































































































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Another update! Very exciting, and apparently Ed must be back at priderock. You've certainly gotten a lot of reviews for this, so others (like me) must find it interesting. Meaning, WE WANT YOU TO CONTINUE!! Update again soon!

Yours and Truly,
-Tearthgrrl

Keep it up man.

Keep it up but more fluff

I like but yes more fluffy romance and it needs to be longer anf focus more on Simba and Shenzi. Keep up the good work.

O like it needs longer chapters and more fluffy romance.

wow. this goes against SO many laws of nature. but overall its a pretty good fanfic

Baka means Cat in japanese, right? And anyway, I thought it was a lovely update, not to mention longer than usual and that's good :) Hope to see more lion/hyena fluff very soon!

Yours and Truly,
-Tearthgrrl.

*squeals from delight* EK!! You've updated! I think it was a great chapter. And it's ok if you want to write other stories; when I don't feel like writing for the Lion King, I write for Juniper Lee.

Anyway, looking foward to your next chapter!

Aw, I love this fic. The thought of Simba and Shenzi together gave me a mini heart attack at first, but now it's growing on me! Update, please! Pretty please with grubs on top!

Sweet, another update! I thought it was cute how Simba and Banzai blushed when Mufasa mentioned they loved Shenzi and Nala. Not to mention a longer chapter, very nice! Can't wait for your next update!

Happy New Year's!

if you were to make the chapters just a wee bit longer, than it would be alot better. Also some detail about the scenary would be good, so it would paint a better picture in our heads. All in allthis is a very interesting storyline and I can't wait to read more.

Another nice update! I bet that lioness was Zira who got a little help from her pro-Scar buddies. And, about this M-RATED fic. I notice that one of the genre is 'romance', that goin' anywhere? Can't wait for your next chapter!