Reviews for No Ordinary Love

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MarionSolo 2008-06-29 ch 4,	abuseLovely story.
stun-gunned 2008-06-21 ch 4, anon.	abuseplease write more! i check back on this story regularly but no update :( i love the idea of this, its absolute genius. please go on! please? ill comment on every chapter if you do! lol x
beca 2008-06-05 ch 4, anon.	abusekeep it up, this is good! if your finding it hard, just look at other fics which are M rated and kind of.. i dont know use them as a basis for what you are writing. if you dont want to do detail, then dont just use lots of generalised descriptions and dont go into it... hope this helped! stun_gunned x
sora kinomoto 2008-05-16 ch 4,	abuseHi! I loved the story so far and want to read whats next =)
Millysah 2008-03-31 ch 4, anon.	abuseJune eighth? That's MY birthday! Sweet!
pdelusional 2008-03-27 ch 4,	abuseYeah, they're definitely attracted to each other:) My hearts breaks for them a little, but aren't they still wonderful? Thank you for writing this, it was the first N/C fic I've ever read and I'm shipping them since the show started. Very lovely writing. I'm sorry that I don't have any suggestion that can help but am looking forward for more:D
imaginationrunsfree 2008-03-24 ch 4,	abuseGood story so far and im looking forward for what may come. If your unsure how to writ "lemons" i would suggest reading some form other catagories to help you and i'd be happy to offer u some advice. It's good to be descriptive but not to dirty, and try to inhance the romantic part of it and not just the smut part. good Luck!
Starclipper01 2008-03-21 ch 4,	abuseCondoms are a possibility. The plastic that they've been using to kiss each other are hints of what the show's writers would like to depict in the show but since it's not a cable show they can't really go there. I don't know how smutty you want to go but they can use their hands to bring each other to pleasure using latex gloves for example. I hope that eventually you'll write the scene where Ned discovers that Chuck's been reading his journal or she admits to him that she was reading it w/o his permission. That would give some dramatic tension. Or, you can have Chuck confront Ned's dad and stepmom for what they've put him through. As for his birthday, you might consider Chuck giving him a locket with clips of hair in it and her picture to remind him that she's always close to his heart. A nice romantic gesture. Ned could give her a friendship ring or engagement ring whatever you decide as you write it. It seems that the way you've been writing about them, they're going to wind up getting hitched eventually.
Animekitty47 2008-03-15 ch 4,	abuseGood luck with the rest of the story! You've been doing good so far, I think you'll be ok. ;) Update soon please!
Pieholer 2008-01-16 ch 3,	abuseYou have to keep going with this - it's just so lovely. Can't wait for the next installment!
SammieSpy 2008-01-11 ch 3,	abusethis was a great chapter. I cant wait for th next one!
Pieholer 2008-01-09 ch 2,	abuseWOW! This is even better than the first chapter. The end makes it more than just a cute story. Please write more and soon!
Animekitty47 2007-12-31 ch 2,	abusegiggles That was cute! I like her method. ;D
WhisperToMeSoftly 2007-12-31 ch 2,	abuseToo cute. ^^ Keep going, luv. Very fun to read, and I'm interested to see what other things Ned said in his diary.
Animekitty47 2007-12-18 ch 1,	abuseThis could be interenting. Are you going to go over those little excerpts we get at the beginning of the episodes too? adds to story alert list

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