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| zarroc1 2008-05-08 ch 2,  | abuseyou should post more chaps. 4 this one i like to see what happen to them ok and if not thats ok |
| LOUDplacidity 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abusePerfect meeting between Hanabi and Kiba. Totally sexy. And you managed to get the two together and keep them in chracter. Beautifully done. Can I also have the link to the NC-17 story? My older sister wanted to read it. |
| usedandabused 2008-04-07 ch 2, | abuseaww that was cute! most of the time its all kibaxhinata! but i like this! its awesome! |
| blackrosevirus 2008-03-23 ch 2, | abuseaw that was cute. I must say, I have fallen for Kiba and Hanabi, they just seem to click. Nice job, I really liked it. |
| crazysmile15 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abuseDEEP, very DEEP! I like HanaKiba better then HinaKiba. |
| sykophreek 2008-02-20 ch 2, anon. | abuseI LOVED this story. You completely nailed how Hanabi should act, and it was all around genuine. The best part was when Naruto ran out with Hinata. That made me laugh. :) |
| Kandace 2008-02-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. I never thought I could like this pairing - I'm diehard Kiba/Hinata - but it's written SO well! I'd love to ask you to write something beautiful and dangerous for KibaHina someday, but I won't. With your talent, I think you could make me like anything. - Which is why it really annoys me that more people haven't reviewed! Don't stop! |
| Xingo 2008-02-09 ch 2, | abuseAwesome! |
| LadyMononoke756 2008-01-15 ch 2, | abusebeautiful i thought it was so realistic and you captured the difference between Hanabi and Hinata so well. I can almost see her, see the whole thing and feel the cold defiance. |
| wickedone43 2008-01-04 ch 2, | abuseWe need more Hanabi and Kiba fics! This one was great...except for the Hinata/Kiba part but it lead to the objective. Let's see you write some more of these. I loved it! I do believe you could continue with it...unless I missed something in your intro (I hate to say it but I rarely read those, maybe I should, huh?). Either way, I totally digged it! |
| silver-eyed 2008-01-03 ch 2, | abusehahha, that naruto, he never realized and when he did, he just grabs her and runs! lol, love this! and i really like hanabi and kiba...too bad i don't have an lj. oh well, hope you continue here on ffnet! XD |
| anonymous 2008-01-03 ch 2, anon. | abuseGreat chapter! I was holding my breath during the wedding, hoping Naruto would get a clue. And Kiba was the perfect person to do the nudging. I loved him! You also painted a Hanabi that I would love to see with him. Thanks for the story. |
| M-dono 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseI don't read enough KibaHana fics because there are only a few of them--I also think it's because I've drowned myself in SasuHina fics XD. But I do like how you've made this. I like how you've made reference to Dante's Inferno and how you gave out Kiba's feelings towards both Hinata and Hanabi. I saw a few typos, but nothing that would ruin or disrupt the story. I hope to see the next few chapters soon! This seems like a really exciting story :) |
| Kagura615 2007-12-17 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is really good! Poor Kiba, though. Unrequited love is harsh. At least there's Hanabi...-is shot- I really like your style of writing. Also, your version of Hanabi is fantastic! There's never one "standard" Hanabi, but this one is a type that I rather like. And combining that with Kiba's sarcastic sense of humour...♥ I look forward to other Kiba x Hanabi fanfics from you. Thanks for getting me into the pairing! |
| Saint Dezzie 2007-12-15 ch 1, | abuseyo this is getting pretty hot ;) can't wait for the next chapter! |