Reviews for Bonds of a Forced Marriage

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MeganSparrow 2008-09-21 ch 28,	abuseAw, you made me cry through most of that! I knew Jack would come around, but now this confrontation with Will? Not good! Truly spectacular chapter! ~Megan~
MeganSparrow 2008-09-21 ch 31,	abuseHow do you get inside Jack's head so well?!??!? So descriptive, and so intense and full of sorrow and love and regret and fear. I love this chapter!
Florencia7 2008-09-21 ch 36,	abuseOH You had me ANXIOUS from your very first line on! Reading your chapters... I always feel like something is about to happen. ALWAYS. At any moment. It's like a rollercoaster. Or worse (better, I mean ^^) Nonononononononono OH sighs with relief It's Lester! ! ! hugs Lester And I nearly had a heart attack there thinking!... Not that you care, but still pouts I'm very glad that at least Elizabeth is not alone! Although I'm not sure how helpful Lester can be... apart from keeping her company... But it's good that she knows that Jack is alive and that he's coming to the rescue! At least that sobs "She was married to him after all, perhaps some of his luck had rubbed off on her. It was a nice thought, in any case." - haha I love this idea ^^ And it can very well be true! And now... TAKE THAT APPLE MONSTER OUT OF MY BELOVED STORY! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ... But I loved how Elizabeth stood up to him in that scene! I LOVE how you write her, strong and vulnerable at the same time, stubborn, persevering, always having so much faith in Jack:] It's so beautiful. And so true. She is a true Pirate King in this story, you portray her perfectly! AH That last fragment was downright SCARY. It was absolutely terrifying and very ominous, and I don't like the sound of it. I don't like the sound of ANYTHING that THAT man says, frankly speaking. And I even refuse to use his name anymore. He doesn't deserve to have a name! ! ! How could he be doing such ugly things and still look at himself in the mirror?! IF he even looks at himself in the mirror, that is... I wouldn't look at myself if I was him. What is going to happen now?!?!?! How is it all going to end?!?!? I can't see it ending happily and that makes me very VERY VERY VVEERRYY nervous and anxious and fearful and and AND absolutely SCARED and I don't even know what I'm writing anymore I'm so SAD right now. They can't die! ! ! Jack can't die, Lizzie can't die, the baby can't die! ! ! ! ! ! I know it's too early to worry about the ending, but... I just feel so LOST thinking that one of them (?#$!?)... or two of them (?!@?%?#$!)... or three of them (?#!?#@!?&#!?!)... might get hurt 0_0 Brilliant chapter! ALL your chapters are heartstoppingly brilliant! Even if they are so SCARY to read... Please, update as soon as you can! I NEED to know what will happen! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Florencia7 2008-09-16 ch 35,	abuseOH How HOW I missed this story! How I missed the way in which you write Jack and Elizabeth! ! ! The scene at the beginning, there is something SO endearing about it, about Lizzie falling asleep next to Jack, about him staying up and thinking, worrying about his family, about them talking to each other, looking at each other, all the words and gestures... I'm probably exaggerating everything right now ^^ But really, EVERY WORD is just so wonderful, your ability to create a wonderful, cozy atmosphere in a story - in this story - it really is amazing. Reading this story feels like coming home. I'm so happy that I can be reading it again! ! ! ! ! ! ! That's good that Jack told Elizabeth the truth. She would have been worrying anyway. There must be a way to get rid of Hector! btw I really hope that he won't show up any time soon... OH I missed Lester! I knew he was going to help! No, Jack, I don't think it's that easy glances at the author with grim distrust Your writitng always keeps me on the edge of my seat. Each paragraph takes my breath away! It's really stunning. Your talent is STUNNING! OH A gold bullet! Maybe a silver pistol would do? lol Nelson would gladly lend it ^^ But a gold bullet... Where is Jack going to get that?... No no no Don't tell me that Jack and Elizabeth will be torn away from each other?? Jack can't leave her alone! ! ! It won't lead to anything good, I KNOW IT! Can't they search for the gold bullet together?!? ""I am happy where ever you are, Jack. You are who I am." - That was SO beautiful:] This entire conversation was just WONDERFUL! And it gave me chills, for some reason... I'm so scared how it all will end... I'm scared to think what might happen... Yes! Lizzie has a plan! I knew it! I knew it! That's a perfect idea! THERE IS HOPE! Yay! YAy! YAY! YA- ... NONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONO! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ... WHY?!??!!? WHY?!??!? WHY??!??!?!?!?!? ... OH Jack, I'm not sure that's the best moment to be having your Buffy moments 0_0 NONONO NO bargains, NO BARGAINS, Lizzie, no! ! ! ! ! kicks the air, screams, shakes the keyboard stares blankly at the screen helps Jack shake Elizabeth NONONONONONONONONONO ! ! ! ! ! ! Please, please, please NOT AGAIN! ! ! ! punches the lampshade NO! It is not happening! It is not! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ... faints
Wicked R 2008-09-12 ch 35,	abusehuh. very dramatic.
Wicked R 2008-09-12 ch 36,	abusesuch a nice touch, the powerful connection between captain and ship.
Chi Town Cody 2008-09-12 ch 36,	abuseReally good story it has been fun a fun read so far-I only have a small problems with it and that being Liz and Jack get caught and bested far too often and far too quickly without much effort, While on the other hand the escape takes too long. Nevermind that though I don't want that to take away from the fact that I have really enjoyed the story thus far and i wait with eager anticipation to read the rest. great job-Cody
Arabella Drummond 2008-09-11 ch 36,	abuseshort but great! Lucky Elizabeth has Lester there with her to help her! Keep up the good job! ;D
Alice001 2008-09-11 ch 36,	abuseanother amazing chapter! I cant wait for more ^_^
StrawberriL2393 2008-09-11 ch 36,	abuseBarbossa! That sadistic bastard! Argh! You wonderful person. I was getting antsy for the update, but you came through beautifully, it was well worth the wait. And I didn't think it was too short. I'm so glas Lester's there! He's my FAVORITE besides..you know, Jack. And Elizabeth. Well, you get the idea. You're very good at creating a like-able character. Poor Jack. I want to hug him. ~Alexa
Future Mrs. Sparrow 2008-09-11 ch 36,	abuse"the rest of the scum of the earth" Barbossa, my friend, you are the KING OF THE SCUM! shudders at the thought of what could have happened Poor Liz... POOR JACK!! Oh, Jack, hurry up and get Lizzie! More soon, love! Puh-lease?
ContradictingxParadox 2008-09-11 ch 36,	abuseOkay, well, it's starting to pick up again. I don't like to see Jack hurt, but I'm glad he's going to live, though I doubt you'd ever kill him off yet. Good chapter, and I'm looking forward to some action!
And MY Hat Enterprises 2008-09-11 ch 36,	abuseThank you, thank you, thank you! That was such an awesome chapter! It never once crossed my mind that Jack could just be injured! I'm really impressed with how evil you've made Barbossa. I find myself hating him more with each chapter. I eagerly await your next update!
sparrowbeth 2008-09-07 ch 35,	abuseGreate story I hope you up date fast:)
Sophies-Welt 2008-08-25 ch 35,	abuseAh, oh my god! How can you stop there? I'm dying! Nice chapter! Update soon!

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