pretty well written...nice story

hmm...10 years is a little too much...2-3 would have been better...
your reason isnt convincing...

I loved this story! One of my favorites!

You should definetly make a sequal to this story about the kids when they are a little older and stuff =]

I'd soo read that!

Aw, I liked the ending! It was sweet! Lmao, I loved the line when Oliver was like "the honeymoon was better." LOL! And I loved the hyper Lilly at the end!

Aw-- Sweet story. :)

Loved all the flashbacks, and so. :)

So cute. :D

Love the hyper Lilly, by the way!

Nice ending to the story. I loved how you were still able to incorporate "memories" into this little epilogue. I loved the line when Oliver said "The honeymoon was better." HA! I cracked up! Congrats on finishing this!

-Frances Flick

I just read this, and it was great! I want to see a final chapter :)

Omg i loved it you have to write another chapter please xx

You should do another chapter!

I loved your story. If you wouldn't mind I'd love to see the next chapter you mentioned. Please keep up the great job.

man i love this story! Update soon!

Meanie, you didn't tell me that you updated . Update soon!

You need to write one last chapter. Please? lol.

aw!

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that was soo cute

please add more, and dont stop here!

Aw! That was really cute. I knew the woman was Miley before Oliver realize it was her. I would like to read your idea for one more chapter. Please update!

hell yeh keep writing next chapter.