poor Little John...he must need a very long holiday after this

Wow, I LOVED this story. :-) Well done! :-)

SO GOOD. Truely. I loved it very much.

I can have a Sleepy!Allan of my own, please?

clever!

I really enjoyed that. Good plot and very well carried out!

Aw! Oh my word, I need more of this! These all suited the charcter well, although I thought it would be Much that was affected with gluttony not djaq. It works perfectly, however. Was John affected with pride then? I'm sure he was- very cleverly there's Will/Djaq! More please!

Loved it, loved it, loved it! It was perfect, and the 7 deadly sins...why didn't I notice that at the beginning? Amazing!

darn i thought it was Pandora's box! well i was close!

Great idea- really original! Though I do think Little John could be accused of the final deadly sin (pride). Anyway, I loved it! Especially Allan's line, “Not being funny or anything, but when did you become so chatty?”

Good job!