 Crazy Lala-Chan 2008-12-31 . chapter 1Oh, yes. I rather liked this story. ^^ I have a little bit of a different view on their relationship, but this story made me smile. The first non-gory KakuHida story I've ever read. Good job! 8D |
 Glasgow-Smile 2008-11-25 . chapter 1lmao brilliant! hidan..or money...hidan or money... i think HIDAN! lol |
 PuppyDogChan 2008-08-16 . chapter 1Wonderful story! I love this! Lol gladly Kakuzu chose his partner! Who can yell out KakuHida? I COULD!
KAKUHIDA! YEAH! XD |
 sasodei-iz-awesome 2008-08-06 . chapter 1YAY 4 HIDAN!
Sasuke: geez my brother is so mean...
Gaara: so is deidara... i feel so bad 4 hidan in the beginning...
ALL: BUT STILL COMPLETELY AND TOTALLY AWESOME! |
 Brisa-Chan 2008-04-25 . chapter 1YES! Haha. GO HIDAN! |
 Envious Lacerations 2008-03-22 . chapter 1Hehe, nice:) I think Kakuzu needs some serious money therapy, lol. |
 WhimsicalShmoo 2008-02-18 . chapter 1XD...I luv it...Uke Reunion night...lol |
 September Wolves 2008-02-15 . chapter 1lol loved the ending |
 PullMeLikeI'mYourZiper 2008-01-30 . chapter 1OMFG OMFG
LMAO!
now I know that fridays are uke's night lol
x'D such good story, totally with humor in it! totally appreciate it
LMAO |
 AlchemyGaara 2008-01-16 . chapter 1Dude. Dude, dude I have an idea.
Do like two more chapters, but with this theme, the UKE-nights but one with KisaIta, and the other chapter SasoDei. Like yeah. Kk? PLEASE.
THE MUFFINS COMMAND IT!
:)
You missed a lot of periods in this though, but YAY!
Do it, DO IT.
Yeah, yeah?
K.
~Naomi |
 dead drifter 2008-01-14 . chapter 1Wow...why didn't I read this yet? You write just fine! It was HOTT, but I think you should bump the rating up to T or M because of the suggestive themes and the language.
I love it!
~Jen |
 Crystaline-Crimson 2008-01-12 . chapter 1Can't believe I didn't read this before! XD
Buahaha! I feel powerful. :3 |
 hazard2self 2007-12-31 . chapter 1Wow, the author's notes were scary but the story was wonderfull. I simply love the concept of Uke-reunion-night! Is there a Seme night I wonder? I love Itachi's single word responses LOL.
Also, I figured out what I wanted to tell you about your writing! You're English is good but one thing to think about is your adjective placement.
--"I wouldn’t deem this a relationship.” said coldly Itachi sipping his hot cocoa.
--It's more common to see things like "Itachi said coldly"
Sorry if you've already heard that. I know you don't like nitpicking either. Just thought I'd share. |
 KiriNoMiko 2007-12-09 . chapter 1that was just brilliant!
most people can't do kakuxhida very well, but you nailed it!
*^.^* |
 gryphonic medli 2007-12-08 . chapter 1YES!! GO HIDAN!! XD AWESOME!! |