Why so negative?
This was refreshing from all the Sam doing Danny, Jack, and Martin Stories.

Loved it so kool. loved how u paired Jack and Viv

That was an AWESOME Story. I LOVE the fact that you are bringing
Jack and Viv together. I've always wanted the two of them to get
married. I know on the show that Viv and Marcus are a very happy
couple. I hope that you write more with Jack and Viv together. I
would love to have the two of them getting married and having at
least 1 child. I've got a cousin that married and ex-model and
she's colored and my cousin is white. They have got the lovliest
little boy. Keep up the AWESOME Writing. Can't wait to read your
next Story. THANK YOU!

Well, I'm not going to flame you, but I'm certainly not going to encourage you to write another chapter. Viv and Jack are colleagues and friends...and that's all. She has a happy marriage, and I totally respect her for keeping her family together . Viv and Jack do not belong together. That spot in his heart is saved for Samantha.

I got no flame for you. Interesting take you have on it. At this point I'd be happy if Viv had her own team and took martin with her, those two at least act like they like each other, the rest of the team is just like one agent stuck with another so it irks me greatly.

As for Sam, I'd love to like her again but I can't. I never liked the J/S thing but was fine with it as long as it remained in the past but since TPTB keep bringing it up I hate it.

Can't help myself, I like M/S but unless Sam becomes nicer, she can go to hell so I like that you just got rid of her.

As for Jack and Viv- my my what an interesting take on an A/U but from the standpoint that they are two strong people, have known each other so long and are equals...I'm fine with it.

And if you're working out your own angst over things gone wrong with WaT...I totally support you. that's a lot of my writing as well.

Thanks for sharing.