|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Invincible TechnoMage|
| Fibinaci 12/25/07 . chapter 3
Hehe Its me, Nev and four girls...thats not right...need more girls! Thats what I expect outta Tony's kid's mouth. Though I expect he got the lecture from Cap about repecting the Ladyfolk. Its nice his tech cant solve all his problems. Cant wait to find out what happened to the troll. Yarr!
| ca186229 12/25/07 . chapter 3
i love your story! i think its interesting that harry is so intelligent. i was 'hell yeah'ing i during the whole snape bit. also like how your starting to set up his childhood with stark.
i was wondering how often you updated. and yes i was picturing those three as pirates. adorable
| Orion Lineus Black 12/24/07 . chapter 3
Keep it coming! Good stuff all around and funny too. I'd like to see a bit more detailed description but other wise this is great fun. I have to remember that they're really young too, you make harry seem so much more mature in his mannerisms.
| xyvortex 12/24/07 . chapter 3
aargh! great chapter mate but tis way too short. yer leavin ur shipmates standin at the end of the plank!
| major wallace 12/24/07 . chapter 3
| PapaMidNite 12/24/07 . chapter 3
i like it what i didnt like is the cliffhanger good job
| Caliko 12/24/07 . chapter 3
ok! happy now! (My fix! My Fix! was going through withdrawal!)
(sigh) the girls just can't obey the words, "Don't look till I tell you!" /snicker/ but.. can you blame them? NOpe. See ya next chappy! Caliko
| Jimm 12/24/07 . chapter 3
Talk like a Pirate Day reference: Very cute.
At first I thought it was a reference to a fic I once saw where the Gryff boys all referred to Hermione as their pirate captain after finding her period romance novels. :-)
Evil cliffhanger, though.
Thanks for sharing this with us.
| oblivionknight7 12/24/07 . chapter 3
Damn u authors and cliff hangers!
| pstibbons 12/24/07 . chapter 3
Noone in Britain uses thousand million for billion. I thought that was an American thing. Stick to billion - us Brits are backward, but not *that* backward.
There is an ITLAP Day? Well. I better wikipedia that.
Nice politics with Sev.
| pstibbons 12/24/07 . chapter 2
Well, it's awfully male, but fun to read.
| dave-gerecke 12/24/07 . chapter 3
Nice Christmas present!
| Shaggy37 12/24/07 . chapter 3
Outstanding chapter! Happy Holidays! I can picture Harry and Padma and Hermione all doing that. The part where Fred and George joined in was even funnier! So what will happen between Harry and Severus later on? What were the silver Sheaths that fell into Harry's hands towards the ends of the chapter? By the way your evil, evil I say for leaving the cliffie like you did! I can't wait to find out what Hermione and Padma were screaming! What exactly is Chaos Magic and what does it do? Will Harry be teaching Hermione and Padma the meditation technic he was using? Will Harry end up with both Hermione and Padma or just Hermione? Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please!:):)::)
| The Unicorn 12/24/07 . chapter 3
Very nice chapter, Harry seems to be acting a bit more manipulative then I'd expect the typical Ravenclaw but not excessively so. I'm glad you're avoiding the super!technology and super!harry problems you seemed to be heading to at the start although I'm not sure I buy Hermionie and Padma turning around when told.
| jon02 12/24/07 . chapter 3
great to see another chapter, great work