Crud, I lost you and this story. It looks like a friggin' MANUSCRIPT! Please double space your story so I can actually read it next time.

Keep writing,

Jake

It's good. I like it. But maybe you should split it into chapters. It's hard to read in one sitting, and if you don't, it's a pain to try and find you're place again.

Brilliant Story!

That was pretty good.

pretty good...

That was a good story! Very original and I like it...please continue and on another note Werewolves rock!