very good

this was so romantic and so heart warming, your a great writter!

*giggles* (To Filia) Did anyone tell you that you talk in your sleep?

Aw *sniffle* How sweet! I love this pairing! Great job but ... isn't there a chapter 2? Well Keep up the good work ... CrimsonFire

Interesting. The plot was good, and I enjoyed the dialogue and parallels between Valgaav and Xellos. The ending line was very appropriate and was a wonderful closing sentence. Overall, I rather enjoyed reading this. Thank you for writing and posting it on the internet.

O.O oh why are these always short? Oh well, I guess that's what you'd call short but (VERY)sweet. I hope you make more

Awwwwwww how cute!

Chinpu na. It is rare that I read anything were Xellos isn't tormenting Filia, so this is very touching on two levels. Kind of sad that that is the way that Mazoku are, but hey, what you going to do. Oh ya this is fiction, unmake them that way. Good luck.

Aw, kawaii! _ Too bad about what happens in the end of TRY, though. Really, though, they do end up together in the end, even if she's got to raise him up as a child first. _ Kinda awkward to put them together after that, tho, 'cause it'd be like he was in love with his mom! O.o;; But I like this kind of story, with Valgaav from TRY and Filia liking each-other. _ Really cute, I like pretty much any couple that isn't yaoi or yuri, but ValFilia has always been a fav.

It is SO cute! This is one of my favourite couples of Slayers!

This is really good! There are barely any ValxFilia fics out there, glad you decided to write one. I enjoyed reading it...

Wah! I loved it! More! More! I love Filia and Valgarv tgether! Great work!