Reviews for Between the Lines

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Funky In Fishnet 2008-07-21 ch 8,	abuseAw awesome ending. I love Andrew and Rose getting together and Ronny becoming a Ranger again. The journey they've all been on is tremendous. Great job :- )
Psycho Tangerine 2008-07-20 ch 8,	abuseThat was a great story. Glad to see Andrew and Rose get together. And Ronny was a riot at the end.
robster72 2008-07-19 ch 3,	abuseI like the description at the start that was very nicely written! Nice descriptions of Tyzonn and Vella as well especially when they were rescuring the source.
robster72 2008-07-19 ch 2,	abuseForgot to mention I loved the lizard mailman in the previous chapter and the casual mention that earth seems to attract a lot of unwelcome attention! Nice ending to this chapter with a new energy source and Power Rangers team to look forward to!
robster72 2008-07-19 ch 1,	abuseNicely written. I like the action scene and you explain the characters nicely for anyone who doesn't know them! The android Mack is interesting and I like the way that Strellia tries to explain earth romance to Mack!
Great stuff 2008-07-13 ch 8, anon.	abuseI really liked seeing all the rangers just being able to spend time together and have fun and it was good Andrew finally told Mack the whole truth, perhaps he'll take some of his sons advice. And now we have a name for the Phantom Ranger.
Chylea3784 2008-07-13 ch 8,	abuseExcellent ending! Well done!
Dagmar Buse 2008-07-13 ch 8,	abusehuge smile Love it! Especially Ronny's (oh-so-predictable) reaction at the end! The whole names thing is hilarious; Phantom Ranger as JOHN SMITH? snicker And "Tiffany/Amber" -- hehe! Only naming one of them "Bambi" would've been more priceless! Good job; pity it's over. What's next? hides
Pairatime 2008-07-12 ch 8,	abusegreat job everyone sounded spot on and it was funny and great. And John Smith I loved that
MzDany 2008-07-12 ch 8,	abuseLOL, the exchange between Alpha and Spencer is great. You write Spencer's imperturbability so well! The idea of a party to have Andrew and Rose meet up again was a really good one, and I was quite impressed at Mack's little 'relationship' speech. The kid's got more insight than expected. Must be all that traveling in the past few years g. The party itself was awesome, with everyone coming together and Ronny ending up the new Yellow Ranger. Everything has come a full circle and ended well, and I have thoroughly enjoyed this story. You did an exceptional job and proved once again that you are truly one of the top PR writers out there!! Thank you for a great read! ...Now how about a nice RJ/Casey ficlet as a homewarming present for an old friend?...;)
MzDany 2008-07-12 ch 7,	abuseAwesome chapter! I love Andrew's introspection at the beginning, his musings about love, and the family history you wove for him. Also, your newest postal alien gave me a good chuckle ;) I'm glad to see that things on Perfection had a good ending and everyone parted as friends. The little tingle of attraction between Artemis and Mack was a nice touch, and I had to laugh at her saying "Don't call me Artie", for the first thing that came to my mind as I read that was Hoji! You also did an excellent job depicting the various relationships going on in this story, and how love can indeed conquer all differences, no matter what race or even species you are. And - Yay for the new Space Rangers I wonder what color Phantom will be, and also for Mack coming home!
Ms. Fairweather 2008-07-12 ch 8,	abuseaw, I love it alot! Is that where you're really going to end it? I'd love to see a bit more... But great story, even if that is the end!
Giannola 2008-07-05 ch 7, anon.	abuseGreat stuff. Seems things have whined down ...for now anyways. Can't wait to see the reunioun between Mack and his dad. And I really can't wait to see what Cassie decides to call 'Phantom'.
Dagmar Buse 2008-07-05 ch 7,	abuseAww, very sweet! Good job; can't wait for the next part!
Chylea3784 2008-07-05 ch 7,	abuseOnce again, excellent chapter! I can't wait to see the flip side of this chapter. Please update soon!

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