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Reviews For: One Thousand Screaming Souls

Gravespawn
2008-04-13
ch 3,
abuseUpdate soon.
Fenix of the light
2008-01-05
ch 3,
abuseI'm gonna keep my eye on this one...it's a good story, just needs a little more per chapter. But otherwise a great job.
How far into the Claymore series are you doing this on?
Zoko
2007-12-27
ch 2,
abuseI'm glad that you have gave some insight into as to why clare might have taken soul blade, but I hope that you explain as to how Olphelia if it the one from the claymore serios survive and such.
Konous the grey
2007-12-10
ch 2,
abuse...I like the fact that you saved Nightmare...his sudden death like that didn't quite do him justice. And I like how you did Clare's slight feelings of change especially when she mentions that the towns people couldn't pay as opposed to you know helping them out. Subtle changes, very subtle.


BUT. Ophelia, at least the one that is in Claymore was dead by this point in the story since Clare first needed to kill her in order to start the search for Raki.


BUT! I also took into account Ophelia could be a character in Soul Calibur and seem to recall someone named that but Wikipedia's entry for characters in the game doesn't mention anyone like that...so I'm at an impasse.


Please respond back.
The Mad shoe1
2007-12-09
ch 1,
abuseVery interesting crossover, i can't wait to see what will happen next.
Konous the grey
2007-12-09
ch 1,
abuseHrm. Mixed. Very mixed. I like the premise. I like the characterization. But some how the fight scene seemed rigid...like it didn't flow creating a smooth transitions of scenes. The frame rate just wasn't high enough.

However, characterization wise I think you're doing decently well. But there is so much more that could be done, but this is just the first chapter, more will come if you desire to.


Keep it up, I eagerly await the next.

-Konous the Grey
Zoko
2007-12-07
ch 1,
abuseA really well done crossover, can't wait to read more.
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