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Lirial's secret
2008-09-02
ch 15,
abuseI think your story is done very well and I have read a ton of fanfiction. I am very glad you did not let someone else's mean comments discourage you from doing what you enjoy.I can't wait for the next chapter and i wish you the bst of luck writing it.
^_^
karlii
2008-08-30
ch 15,
abuseHopefully, Sev will begin to integrate those disparate memories... poor guy... And then he'll start to get to know Harry too.. that'll help.

Keep up the good work!
Ariana-blood-hehe
2008-08-29
ch 15,
abuseI can fully understand why you would ask for reviews, because it do make writing a lot more fun when you know you're writing it for someone.
But, to actually review, I don't thik this was a bad chapter, I actually liked it, and the story is getting on. I am really lookign forward to when Harry get's to know the truth, but I also do hope it won't come just jet. But this was really nice, and I can't wait to see what will happen in the next occlumency class!! ;)
joanna
2008-08-27
ch 15, anon.
abuseGood job on you!Your voice is coming through again, and Snape feels right. Having him think his whole talk with Remus last chap was a lie he was telling makes it fit better. And I like the way you're going about it,slow,but not too slow and Snape's not getting a quick personality change. Excellent!
zoya4
2008-08-27
ch 15,
abuseHey you are doing a great job with the story. Those who dont lke can buzz off:) Keep writing! Waiting eagerly for your next update
Badbonita
2008-08-27
ch 15,
abuseYes! Finally someone included in their fic the conversation where Harry - while still being friends with Hermione - told her to stop telling him what to do!
Thank you!
MizzCrazy17
2008-08-27
ch 7,
abuseI've been reading your story for a while.
I find it a great story! One of the best from the Harry Potter Fanfic!! :D So don't listen to people who are saying such things.
Please update soon, can't wait till the next chapter!
Cielogris
2008-08-27
ch 15,
abuseNice chapter, thank
update soon please
nilpotter
2008-08-26
ch 15,
abusethanks for new chapter.i don^t like snape.he know harry is his son but he still cruel.if harry learn true he doesnt receive snape almost (i hope) please update soon
HpFanficFan
2008-08-26
ch 15,
abuseit's a nice chapter. i hope you update soon. I wish to find out what happens next.
TerraFria
2008-08-26
ch 15,
abuseSomeone told you your story was bad? Well that person obviously doesn't know what they are talking about. Compared with some other stories i've looked over this one is very well writen.

Sounds like someone was just trying to make a good writer feel bad... This is an ejoyable story to read and i'm glad you take the time to post it!

(sorry if this double post, my net is evil..)
KimSpiritTalks
2008-08-26
ch 15,
abuseI really wish people who were having a bad day would just lock themselves in their room and shut off their computer. Your story is wonderful any critcism like that should be completely ignored. The problem is theirs, not yours. I loved this chapter because I can really see Snape struggling with his conflicting emotions. How would any of us feel if we found that we had to become a parent to, or were always the parent of, a child we didn't care for? It wouldn't be at all easy, I'm sure. Very good writing!
JWOHPfan
2008-08-26
ch 15,
abuseNice chapter. I think you should just ignore bad or mean reviews. No one forced them to read the story so if they don't like it they shouldn't read it. I for one thoroughly enjoy your story and I look forward to the next chapter!
theravenwaits
2008-08-10
ch 14,
abuseThese 14 chapters have been thrilling roller coaster ride to read! I'll wait for an update!
karlii
2008-08-06
ch 14,
abusewell, at least that's something for Harry! I hope Sev starts to integrate his memories quickly... or soon!

Keep up the good work!
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