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| StellaDiMaggiolino 2008-06-29 ch 45,  | abuseThis is the most amazing fic I have ever read, since I started reading on this site when I was roughly 10. haha. So well written, perfectly punctuated, grammatically correct, the case had the facts straight, OOC was completely avoided. I think this was written as well, if not better, than the original episodes, or even Kathy's books (But I would never tell her so)! =] |
| Accolades 2008-06-22 ch 27, | abuseSecond time reading through this story. With 45 Chapters, this fanfiction is the longest I've ever read. Or perhaps, the longest that has prompted me to keep reading. This is the second story of yours I've read and I really like your work. Look forward to reading more! If I could make one suggestion, I would recommend upping the rating of this story from T to M. There are various scenes that draw a fine line between "hinting" and "acting." |
| hope-everlasting 2008-06-16 ch 45, | abuseawesome and quite believable. |
| CarineM 2008-06-15 ch 45, | abuseexcellent story! I loved it |
| saragillie 2008-06-06 ch 45, | abuseLol... I think Booth should have gone for the mile high club and then arrested himself. I'd love to see how Cullen handled that one. Might be amusing fodder for a one shot... |
| saragillie 2008-06-06 ch 21, | abuseLoved the second of these sentences: Maybe it was time to get rid of that line. Get a whole fleet of bulldozers or maybe an entire Panzer division to just run it right over and obliterate it forever. |
| Steph3 2008-05-20 ch 45, | abuseAbsolutely brilliant. I really enjoyed it! |
| colly 2008-05-11 ch 45, anon. | abuseaw that was great. I love your stories! they're not only great&well written, but they're well thought out and believable too. you're really great at this! |
| daisy07 2008-05-10 ch 45, | abuseI have really enjoyed this story and would like to thank you for taking the time to write it. I will definitely keep watching for any future work you do. |
| UberPest 2008-05-08 ch 45, | abuseGreat story, thanks for giving us such an entertaining ride! |
| Kyizi 2008-05-08 ch 45, | abuseOh, *flails* I do so love this and that really was the perfect ending :) |
| acceb 2008-05-07 ch 45, | abuseI loved it. Great story. You stayed true to the characters and did a great job on progressing their relationship in a believable way. Thank you. |
| flanmaja 2008-05-07 ch 45, | abusethis fic is amazing. loved it very much. |
| saturn567 2008-05-06 ch 45, | abuseawesome job! |
| CSI-4077 2008-05-06 ch 45, | abuseGreat ending! That was a terrific story and this chapter was a great way to finish it up. It was very sweet and I'm glad you didn't make Cullen the bad guy. Whatever happened to him I wonder. That was great, them seeing the reporter. All in all, an incredible story. Thanks, Leah |