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Reviews For: Homecoming

Third Perspective 2008-03-27 ch 1,	abuseSomehow, I never seem to tire whenever I read this. It was... unexpected, to be honest, that the story took a VERY different direction than what I had speculated upon reading the early part of the story; nonetheless it came out interesting and off-beat than other 1/362 fics out there. I appreciate the fact that even though it was the story you hadn't planned, you kept it amazingly IC and realistic. The dialogue was also convincing. Apart from the scene where they kiss (I never was a fan of kissing scenes, unless it is absolutely necessary), which I felt was too "drastic" (yet it was "fluffy" and appealing at the same time), it was definitely a worthy read. This fic made me more appreciative about these two individuals. Great job! - Third Perspective
numbuh-14000 2008-03-18 ch 1,	abusecute! keep writting!
Name: 2008-02-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseYAY YOU ROCK! :D
Tracey Claybon 2008-02-11 ch 1,	abuseNice work. It's readable and coherent, unlike most of the KND stories I've seen to date, and it captures all the bittersweetness of childhood romances. You did a great job on this.
Tetsu Deinonychus 2008-01-27 ch 1,	abuseWOW, this was amazing. Kinda sad epilogue, though.
Jae B 2008-01-06 ch 1,	abuseYeah, yeah, I know this is really late in comming, but I finally reviewed. It's amazing what you can pull out of a character's demeanor. What makes this story so fascinating is that it takes two kids and forces them to act like adults. Hm...it sounds like they work too much. Have they ever heard of child labor laws? lol Anyway, you always manage to pen a great story. Never stop writing. -Jae-
acosta perez jose ramiro 2007-12-26 ch 1,	abuseExcellent story. Nice job with this couple. I actually like Lizzie as a character; her interaction with Nigel, a great opposites-attract relationship, was quite funny. Her annoying yet caring personality made a good complement for Nigel's more serious and responsible one. However, I also understand why it didn't work; Nigel, literally, is married to his job, and Lizzie wasn't ready to compete with that; sure, she assisted on some missions, and at times -usually by accident- even saved Nigel and company, but she had no real interest on the KND aside her relationship with a sector leader. Actually, when she dumped him, the girl, aside her personal feelings, did it too because understood Nigel's responsibilities would always come first and it would be selfish from her to stop the boy from saving kids in distress; in that sense, Lizzy matured a lot from her first appearences on the show, where she was totally manipulative and demanded Nigel's full attention without considering his friends and job. Trivia fact; here in Mexico, Lizzie and Angelica Pickles are Spanish-dubbed by the same woman, Patricia Acevedo. She didn't even try making minor changes, as usually when doing different characters; the voice is practically the same in tone and volume, fitting both girls perfectly. Keep the good writing and Happy Holidays.
Invader Johnny 2007-12-19 ch 1,	abuseWell Its been a while since I last saw KND but yeah I seen those episodes and the hints of Numbuh 362 LIKING Numbuh 1. So I gotta say I approve of the pairing and of course I liked the fic, it was both fluffy AND sad. Invader Johnny Signing Off.
December'sRose 2007-12-10 ch 1,	abuseO.O Oh my . . .this fic was, well, fantastic! Absolutely fantastic! There's just no other explination for it, seriously, I'm speechless! I haven't read a fic as decent as that in a while and it really made my morning. It was so perfectly IC, the imagery was excellent and the dailog was amazing beyond words! Plus, I love how you added just the right amount of fluff without overdoing it at all. Again, fantastic job! I'm really looking forward to reading more for your work in the future! ~December'sRose
max remy1362 2007-12-08 ch 1,	abusesniffsniff* that was so sad! its the best 1/362 story ever!
The J.A.M. a.k.a. Numbuh i 2007-12-08 ch 1,	abuseHey, I KNEW I could count on you to find your groove again!! EXCELLENT story!
Musicgirl101 2007-12-08 ch 1,	abuseI am mixed between killing you and hugging you. I'm going to have to kill you for the ending, because it's sad and horribly well written, and yet I have to hug you for the rest, which was fantastical. Since I haven't seen INTERVIEWS yet, I'll just have to disregard any spoilers there might have been. Anyway, that was fantastic! You have this WAY of writing 1/362 that is so sad for them, and yet it's so... argh, I don't know... human. That's what I'm looking for. It's very Romeo and Juliet, the kind of love they have. Great job! And who cares if this went in the completely opposite direction of what you thought. It was fantastic anyway!
Carolanne Clark 2007-12-08 ch 1,	abuseWow. I have to hand it to you, this is better writing than a lot of other people I know. Good job! I'm going to go and read all your other stories now. It's realistic, and you included the events of the past few episodes quite nicely.
Nigel's Leading Woman 2007-12-08 ch 1,	abuseWhoo, I love this! Awesome work as always, Lord M. Though I found the ending sad, but hopefully Nigel will be coming back in the end of INTERVIEWS. Why? Because I'll make him-RACHEL will make him... (laughs). Still, I loved this one-shot! It's going to my favorites in a heartbeat! Wonderful job, buddy! ;)
Stephanie120 2007-12-08 ch 1,	abuseOh my...That was simply amazing!Great story Lord Malachite!!

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