Good imagery here.

Cute. Very sad and sweet.

=D

Hey!iThink This is...perfect.. i cant feel the essence as well as i want because Im a spanish speaker and its not the same reading thingsinmyown language but.. I loved it!

AW! This story so cute! Yuuko and Clow so belong together.

"She does not dream of him because dreams are realities waiting to exist, and he was a reality that no longer is." I absolutely love this line. I love how bittersweet everything is.

I love how vivid this is. Good job.