OMGsus... So well written... Amazing… had me in tears.

Awwwwwwwwwww that was beautiful.

It was so sad and tragic.

This is one of those things that make me say "well Edward, its too late to do anything now. Bet you wish you had."

At least Bella got what she wanted at the end. So that's something. I don't see her having a good life. In this story I imagine she was known as the town tragedy. A beauty who had her heart broken beyond anyone's ability to repair. Never married, no kids and probably never had a date or a lover. Tragedy.

oh my god! THAT WAS SO SWEET AND TORTRUS ? THE POOR THING ? BOTH OF THEM .just to the fact that you love someone , that smeone loves you back , and you choise to be st apart ,URG! thank god it was nit like that in the story.

because if it did, you would 've written it better

That's so sad... but good. Not like it's good Bella died but good writing. you know what... nevermind hahaha lol liked the story

Amazing. Just amazing.

o crap that made me cry

i'm going to cry!

It was so sad!

I actually cried! That's how sad it is...

Or that's how emotional I am...

aww! i was listening to that song when i found this. i got all emotional...hehe

aww omg that was soo sad! great job though i love bella and edward!

wow

wow

wow

wow

wow

so good

really good

amazingly god

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sad!

i cried the whole time!

my mom is yellin at me thinking someone died!

awe that was beutiful...

loved the story, wish she was younger and he could turn her :D but thats just me. really great story

i never cry and this had made me cry.

so well written and so sad...

much hugs

lizzie hopscotch

i love this story. it made me cry. :')