that was good though maybe you can contd it so naruto finds out who his father is

the humor was ok.. though i think it needs a second part; like what made Yondaime Hokage so angry? what was ero-sennin's story about?
hmm.. come to think of it, has anyone really attempted to guess what his ICha ICha series is about? hehehe
it could have been more fun if you gave us any idea
and i think there's a greater possibility that Jiraiya will write about Tsunade than abt anyone else.. hehe
but well, you're the writer..

That seemed a litle lack luster IMHO. I like the plot(The god of death reading Jiraya's pervy books, it's hilarious) but it seemed to come apart about midway.