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| Pikfan 2008-06-22 ch 4, | abuseShorter than the other stories, but still kind of sweet. And this story has a moral too. |
| Pikfan 2008-06-19 ch 3, | abuseWow. That chapter is absoluly amazing! I really can't wait for the next chapter. |
| MuchaLuchaAndMe 2008-03-26 ch 2, | abuseHer father was only 4 feet tall. Legasp. So, was the first brother who hugged her like a three year old or something? It doesn't feel like you specified that. |
| Spartan-Guy 88 2008-03-21 ch 2, | abuseDon't worry about being late, you're not the only one who is pre-occupied with stuff. I have a job now. Nice chapter. |
| Pikfan 2008-03-21 ch 2, | abuseWell, it's something really worth the 3 months. Very good chapter. |
| Spartan-Guy 88 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abuseNice story. I usually like those kind of romances with the paranoid/protective father in them. |
| Pikfan 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abuseI really liked the first chapter an all, but it needs a tiny dash of humor. Just like I put a tiny dash of drama in my humor (in a random way) fanfics. Try it out once in a while. |