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Reviews For: Parent's Day

Pikfan
2008-06-22
ch 4,
abuseShorter than the other stories, but still kind of sweet. And this story has a moral too.
Pikfan
2008-06-19
ch 3,
abuseWow. That chapter is absoluly amazing! I really can't wait for the next chapter.
MuchaLuchaAndMe
2008-03-26
ch 2,
abuseHer father was only 4 feet tall.

Legasp.

So, was the first brother who hugged her like a three year old or something? It doesn't feel like you specified that.
Spartan-Guy 88
2008-03-21
ch 2,
abuseDon't worry about being late, you're not the only one who is pre-occupied with stuff. I have a job now. Nice chapter.
Pikfan
2008-03-21
ch 2,
abuseWell, it's something really worth the 3 months. Very good chapter.
Spartan-Guy 88
2007-12-09
ch 1,
abuseNice story. I usually like those kind of romances with the paranoid/protective father in them.
Pikfan
2007-12-08
ch 1,
abuseI really liked the first chapter an all, but it needs a tiny dash of humor. Just like I put a tiny dash of drama in my humor (in a random way) fanfics. Try it out once in a while.
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