Great story! Not sure if I read it before... I love the dialogue but also really enjoyed your descriptions of them both.

Reni - Just read this again as part of the re-read. It was still just as awesome as ever. Love a glimpse into the pre-relationship. :) - b.

Just giving it a re-read. It was really a fun story, sweet too.

Sweet story - love the pre-ship stuff. you did a very good job.

their shyness with each other is really sweet. good chapter.

Good Chapter .. love the Jennifer/Ronon pairing.

I know i'm a little behind the times, but this story was really great! It's so cool to have read all those fanfics that you've written and just now read your first one! You did an excellent job! do you have an epilogue for this story? i hope so! :)

Great story

I really liked your glimpse of how their friendship may evolve. Great story.

very cute!

Very nice first fic. You need to watch your spelling and maybe have a beta check through each chapter to correct anything you might have missed. Two sets of eyes are better than one. Ronon seemed a little wordy to me, but otherwise in character. Can't wait to read your next fic.

I'm liking this very much so far, can't wait to read more.

I liked that Ronon could help her and she was able to talk to him. :-)

I could see Ronon not knowing how to deal with an upset and crying woman (cause it tends to make most men uncomfortable and not know what to do) but am glad he didn't run and stayed. :-)

Like that he thinks of Teyla as an older sister and wanted to make sure she was ok.