Reviews for Glittering Violet Moon

Ruingaraf 2007-12-08 ch 1,	abuseNice take on the theme. :D It would have been better as a 500-word, I think, but oh well. In-character, as usual. Yay for people taking my challenge!
Fan Fan Girl 2007-12-08 ch 1,	abuseHm. Sometimes I felt like you were dead-on in this fic, and sometimes I felt like you were kind of off. Like, the beginning was great to give us a sense of setting, but you spelled the word "wither" wrong and you set up Mizuti's homeland to be a "deceiving" place. Okay, okay, I get how it's deceiving. You build on this idea that everything seems dull and toxic and fake. Then in the last paragraph, you say "but" and then Mizuti suddenly warms up to her homeland. I don't get why she would be so foriving after seeing just the moon. Is it because it's the only beautiful thing in her land? Is it because it's only violet beneath the Taintclouds? Yeah, the moon is pretty, but shouldn't she be sad that the purpleness of it is fake, too? There are depressing descriptions all throughout the piece but then at the end Mizuti is inexplicably happy. I don't get it. In my opinion it didn't come together very well... but it was still a good drabble. Sorry for practically flaming you. XD What you did RIGHT was make it low and gloomy. Keep on writing!
Legacy Now 2007-12-08 ch 1,	abuseMokona: O-O That... totally ROCKS! I wuv this! Place- check Discription- double check! Feelings- triple check! Overall appearance- A BIG CHECK! U rule Brens-chan!