I am utterly amazed. I would love to hear more about your prince and princess. How they run their kingdom, help the poor and help the pesant children. YOu truely have a gift. Continue to follow your muse.

You should know that I rarely feel obliged to review stories (great, now I sound arrogant...). But this story, with it's humor and it's romance and it's predictability simply screamed for praise!

I opened the story expecting another piece of hamster crap like most of the stories in the Fairy Tales genre, and instead was pleasantly surprised by a tale that was well-thought out while still retaining the fairy tale feel (except without the really gross punishments for the evil characters).

Priscilla was actually intelligent (which shocked the hell out of me, I'll admit), and Seth was deliciously wonderful. I also love your ending line: Because why did I need a toadstool prince,
when I had my knight in shining armor? It fit so well, which is quite a feat considering how hard it is to really end a story without it sounding weird.

So congratulations, this story deserves much more love and attention than it seems to be getting.

Keep Writing,

I'm_Kind_of_a_Big_Deal

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Extremely Sweet

I love it! It's nice to have a story that breaks the molds, great job! I can't wait until you write another one... you will write another, won't you?

Great story! You know, I have always wondered about that--why princesses who kiss toads ALWAYS fall in love with them. You'd think there'd be one or two who were already in love with someone else. The spell idea is perfect! And I love how the toad prince fell in love with someone else anyway! Keep writing, I will definitely read more of your fics if you post to this section again!

bookomania

This is absolutely adorable. Very well written and true to fairy-tale standard.
You've got a great and easy going style. Hope you write some more.
-Allemery