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| gabrieldarke 2008-06-16 ch 10,  | abuseokay i love this ani-fic... update soon!... later! |
| Butterfliedd 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abusei love this so far! i'll review more later, but i just needed to tell you that. :] |
| Faith360 2008-06-06 ch 10, | abuseNice! Action! I like it - it's a good way to write Jordan. -Faith |
| Faith360 2008-05-17 ch 9, | abuseThat was good, I was a little anxious for some jaguar action. -Faith |
| Mrowrkat98 2008-05-17 ch 9, | abuseAnother outstanding chapter. Keep it up! |
| PowerPen 2008-05-11 ch 8, | abuseI have no suggestions, only praise. This is probably because I'm biased. :P A great two chapters, I love this story. Please update soon! |
| Faith360 2008-05-11 ch 8, | abuseOohh...Jordan's hiding something. That was a good chappie :) -Aly |
| Mrowrkat98 2008-05-10 ch 8, | abuseI'm so glad you've continued the story so far. It's great! I wonder why Tom got two battle morphs though. Can't wait to see the cheetah in action. I know it's one of my favorites. ^.^ I'm excited for the next chapter! |
| Faith360 2008-04-15 ch 7, | abuseDang, getting intense...nice chapter! -Faith |
| Faith360 2008-04-13 ch 6, | abuseA root! (giggles) Even though I have nothing to say but 'nice chapter', which it was, I feel an obligation to review because this is one of my favorite stories. Kudos to you, hope you feel special :) -Faith |
| Mrowrkat98 2008-04-12 ch 6, | abuseWow... that's intense. I'm still loving it ^.^ |
| PowerPen 2008-03-20 ch 5, | abuseI like how you characterize Tom, Jordan, and Sara. They seem realistic enough without being uninteresting. I also like that there is a different motive driving them than the 'save the world' one. This is a refreshingly unique story, keep up the good work. |
| Faith360 2008-03-13 ch 5, | abuseDang. Intense. Nice plan, overall, though. Good chapter. -Faith |
| Visser Assassin 2008-03-13 ch 5, anon. | abuseTom destroyed the Kadrona? Sweet! |
| Visser Assassin 2008-03-07 ch 4, anon. | abuseWhy would Tom blast his finger off? That's idiotic! |