Great ideas in your story. I enjoyed the idea of Logan falling temperarily for a gold digger on the rebound. You should concentrate on fleshing your ideas out more it would really help the flow of the story as well as give it more depth

please put up the epilogue soon!

This is great.

Good job, but Rory didn't tell Logan about the baby. Please tell me she will in the Eppy.

Oh i love it

This is great.

Logan is way calmer telling Rory about everythig than I would be in that situation!

YAY she woke up! Love the story.

YES Rory's awake!

omg yay she's awake. cant wait to find out wat you have planned next. update soon

very cute
keep working twards your writing but this was so much better than the first few chapters Keep working to better you skills and you'll do great
Good Job i'm so excited for you

GREAT CHAPTER

intresting

more... please

very choppy switching of the POV
Relax when you write and use details
cute update but the conversations seem Forced and stiff