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| LawandOrderSVUqueen 2008-08-12 ch 2,  | abuseGREAT! |
| BabyD-MontanaGirl 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseI couldn't even finish this chapter I was chuckling so hard. *snicker* 'Elliot lagged behind a moment longer “Your lips moved,” he told Joe before he turned and followed his partner.' Lmao!! I think it's so very true to the show that Elliott makes a smart assed comment because he doesn't like any kind hitting on Olivia. *snicker* Holy cow. That was funny as all get out. Anywayz, I'm off to actually finish the chapter and keep on going...great job so far though. |
| sg1star 2007-12-26 ch 2, | abuseWhat an interesting story, but waiting for the twist that always seems to fall in svu just when you think every thing is okay, so am looking forward to the next chapter. |
| AliasCSINYFriendsER 2007-12-15 ch 2, | abuseOMG, that's heartbreaking...poor guy. He just wanted to see his daughter...and his daughter just wanted to see him. :o( That's horrible. But...I still feel suspicious about him. He's not going to turn out to be a creep, is he?? LOVE IT! More soon! Luv ya! mandi *_* EO FOREVER! |
| LOCISVU 2007-12-10 ch 2, | abuseWait,who has legal custody of Amy?I can understand that Amy's father misses her. |
| Hope06 2007-12-10 ch 2, | abuseWOW amazing twist I lovethe emotion and yep there is Liv again being the good cop and trying to keep her partner in check!! |
| Hope06 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abuseWOW amazing you are defentely doing the show justice I love that the two of them just have to look at each other and they know what to do |
| MyLittleTwilightAddiction 2007-12-10 ch 2, | abuseOne of my best friend's name is amy! Yay! ...That was random... anyways, keep writing! |
| SVUfan1006 2007-12-10 ch 2, | abusewow what a twist! i'm glad amy is okay!! can't wait to see what happens next! |
| OE-shipper-2006 2007-12-10 ch 2, | abuseooh...good chapter!! |
| MegMann 2007-12-10 ch 2, | abuseExcellent work. Great case story |
| Fan Boy 101 2007-12-10 ch 2, | abuseGood one. Can't wait for more. |
| MHFever 2007-12-09 ch 2, | abuseOh interesting. But this is way too neat so I'm guessing you've got a curveball for us. "Christian children are taught to believe that an old man breaks into their houses while they’re sleeping and leaves presents. They place a lot of trust in Santa Claus.” Just to let you know, Santa has nothing to do with Christianity and while there are plenty of Christian families who tell their kids about santa, some believe its pagan. My dad's parents refused to even tell him about santa when he was little. |
| MHFever 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abuseI like the way you're writing this :) Great story so far. |
| TV Angel 711 2007-12-09 ch 2, | abusewow. please keep going with this great story. you are a great writer! i love this story! e&o forever! svu forever! |