I know that this is a uber late review, but seriously, your story was awesome!

this story is great, except why on earth did you kill kanda instead of lenalee?

I love the Mother Shadow. She's my favorite character in this story.
actually, I just love everything about this story! I've always hated the pairing Allen x Lenalee, but it just fits so well in the story.
It's really great! I love how you write Allen's character!
sincerely -shikamarurules1

yeah~i LOVE this story! and allen-chan is just so damn COOL! :) but i'm really sad that yuu-pon died though...

nu yuu-chan! come bak nu dont die! nu yuu-chan~!

YAY! ilove this fic! its so so so so so so cool! but...but... YUU-CHAN DIED! WAH< HOW COULD YOU!?!?!?! im sad... ah, but it had a happy ending, so thats good. ^.^x

W0W ur story rocked can u pls make more,n tell me i loved it :3

gosh, almost a year after you published this fic I found it! but...god, it's excelent!
I'm impressed on how you worked the story, it's clean and very well explained, the characters are well set and well work,at least the ones that appear the most.
the ideas of the Mother Shadow and magik were great and Allen's dream world (when he's "dead") was awesome!
wow, there are so many things to talk about your fic but right now...I'm not really well so I'm going to finish telling you that I TOTALLY LOVE YOUR STORY! is one of my favs of D.Gray-man!
congrats!!

WOW!
amazing yea?
i can't believe this...why t he hell didnt i read this earlier?
jeez...
angry at myself...

poor Kanda *sob sob* and Tyki-pon! *cries out loud*( even thought I saw it comming)XD love the story thought~

moahahaha! I`m a genious!XD I finally managed to read chapter 2!just had to use the schools internet insteadXD this chapter was just...*w* sparkling eyes~ exiting!>w

yez! I finally managed to read this chapter! >W< every time I have trien I get this stupid error thing from fanfiction... now I have the same problem with chapter 2!XD
love the story~

why did kanda have to die? *sniff* anyways, this was an awesome story ^^

NO
KANDA!
OMG ! I can't believe he died!
T-T Its so sad...
Your stories always manage to make me cry the most so far T-T
Thank you for the awesome story

D8... D=... o8... O8... a-a-a-allen... l-l-lavi...08... n-n-no way