Okay. I... LOVED it.

But. (yes: but) you can't use that text as an OS.

It's not "enough".

There is no... the conclusion is too easy, to quick. A more trusting Ovelia is nice, but... it remove all the whole the ending dramatical dimension.

So, you now have to find another way to conclude the grand plot of FFT.

Your characterization is okay, and your writing is nice to read. More descriptions wouldn't hurt.

I will be waiting in case you decide to give us a deeper conclusion.

Pretty Good. I really like it.