This was kinda scary, that some clans will just corrupt... But very interesting at the same time.

At first I thought that the Uchiha clan was getting ridiculously strong, but then I realized that every generation will surpass the previous one (I think that quote comes from Naruto anime), and the all shinobi will go stronger.

The most interesting one is, for me, the Hyuuga clan. I can definitly see something like that happen.

You wrote about the Aburame clan, that the child enters the shinobi academy at the age of twelve. Don't they enter at the age of six? I think 12 is the usual age of the child when it graduates.

Good. Scary, but good. There should be something about the Byakugan in the Uzumaki section, though. Yes, I like the NaruHina, and it's (hopefully) going to be a canon pairing.

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