Reviews for Transfiguration

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XRaiderV1 2008-07-03 ch 2,	abusewell, I must say, this is an interesting story, I really cant wait to see what happens next.
Tigerprime 2008-03-12 ch 2,	abuseYou're really making me want to beg for more and more right now Nice that you're using characters from the movie toyline instead of G1 (well the movie is a diferent univere and not a reborn G1 as most fans think, idiots) but on CHAPTER 1, what where Payload and Dropkick doing with Autobot Longarm? you know that Dropkick and Payload are DECEPTICONS right? Dropkick has a giant Decepticon insigna on his bonnet/roof for goodness sakes. oh they're from cybertron too. Awesome that Cliffjumper is just like what was written on his bio from the toy, bet he now loves fighting angels as well as decepticons. Too bad Bumblebee staying with Sam, Mikala and the kid Danial (what a sweet G1 refernce :D ) Guessing Elita-1 is using the target exclusive toy from the movie line witch was a Energon Acree repaint in G1 acree colours (Acree was also sold as an eclusive with that mould but in blue untill the offical Deluxe magenta buell motercyle mould came out that was meant to be in the movie) Hope we'll later see these chapter from the toyline AUTOBOTS: Evac (blackout remould as a rescue helicopter) Salvage (Dropkick repaint) Landmine (S7 Dunebuggy) Smokescreen (FAB Jazz repaint in G1 smokescreen colours) Arcee (she was orinally meant to be in the movie but was replaced by ironhide cause she was a girl) Camshaft (Swindle rapint with a G1 Bluestreak like colour scheme in vehicle mode) DECEPTICONS: Thundercracker (Starstream repaint with a more G1-like head) Ramjet (FAB Starscream reapint in G1 Ramjet colours) Stockade (S7 van) Incinerator (Osprey helicopter) Dreadwing (Mig-27 Jet in Grey camaflage) Overcast (Dreadwing rapaint in Black & Yellow) Swindle (red chevy colbat car) god luck on the next chapter
Reyes Yong Nydia 2008-01-02 ch 2,	abusepretty good.
gunman 2007-12-19 ch 2,	abuseThis was a great update. I loved the way you had the Autobots infiltrate NERV and quickly reveal that Shinji and Optimus were one. I liked how Ironhide and Ratchet are in character, the weapons specialist and the medic. You also have the Autobots destroy the Angel, which is going to prove to just about everyone how effective allies the Autobots can be. And I can't help but notice how this is going to screw with Gendo and his plans. Gendo needed Shinji in order to wake up Yui from the Eva, but without a 'human' Shinji Ikari, that's totally impossible. And considering how Cliffjumper just destroyed the Third Angel its going to be impossible for NERV to hide this from the world. Especially since the Autobots don't trust Gendo and her group. It makes me wonder if Gendo won't try to throw in with the Decepticons to get his scenario back online. This is going to be alot of fun to read down the road. Write on!
saberstorm 2007-12-19 ch 2,	abuseThe guy in the ocean is Megatron or Galvatron. If you fuse Elita 1 with someone, fuse her with Rei, because I just don't see Optimus liking Asuka. Asuka's too much like the @$$hole from Section Seven. Think about it, Asuka and Optimus? Look out world, here's World War 3, 4, and 5 as well as Impacts 3 to 10. That, and fusing Elita 1 with Rei goes with you fusing Optimus and Shinji. Shinji needed a better outlook on life (Optimus), and Rei needs better understanding of various things such as family and friends (Elita 1). Here's a dumb idea, but what if Keele and Megatron were fused together?
Daito-san 2007-12-16 ch 2,	abuseIf you didn't catch that hint with Masterforce: they were human beings with an ability to transform into a component of their respective Transformer body. (I'm sure, Allspark has still some unknown abilities concerning human/transformer symbiosis.) With this, your story will gain "human factor" But i'm really worried about the development of the story with almighty, all-knowing, indestructible, in all respects perfect Transformers with inactive Evas in cages.
Rose1948 2007-12-13 ch 2,	abuse::chuckles:: Oops. I haven't seen the movie either. At least not the 2007 one. Now the cartoon one I saw shortly after it was released to DVD/videotape. Got the soundtrack to that as well. Interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing how this develops.
DarklightZERO 2007-12-13 ch 2,	abuseWell I have never seen the Transformers movie but I decided to take a look at your story. In terms of writing. Its good. Nice and descriptive. But in terms of plot. I was interested in how Optimus Prime/Shinji combination would work and I saw that you made work quite well but I am unhappy to see that you have seemed to have wrote the Evangelions, Heck the whole of NERV, out of the story since the Transformers can defeat the angels by themselves we don't really need the Evangelions now don't we. Another thing that I am unhappy about is that the Transformers seemed to know everything about NERV, does that incude instrumentality? You know that would have been a good idea. Somewhere in the story the Autobots find out that their new home is already under threat by its own inhabitants. Well I will continue to watch this story to see now the story is going to go along. You have got my interest. Until next time Farewell! P.S. Are you going to bring Yui back? Well I will keep watching your story and see now it all works out.
avatoa 2007-12-13 ch 2,	abuseKLCKASS! Please update it soon.
Neferius 2007-12-12 ch 2,	abuseI hope your happy that you just ruined years worth of planning by a bunch of old men. Happy indeed. I'm still wondering how Prime will utilize his Holo-Shinji to interact with others since being a transformable robot does have disadvantages. You've done a good job with the Autobots so far and I'm looking forward to a little Decepticon action as well. Read ya Later
Robby Cartwright 2007-12-12 ch 2,	abuseCOL
BIGGZ1344 2007-12-12 ch 2,	abuseSEELE's plan have definitly gone down the drain, and what about Elita 1? will her spark fuse with somone? and you MUST tell me about the look on Gendo's face.
Ant Crown 2007-12-12 ch 2,	abuseStarts humming the ATeam/FMP theme* Optimus: I love it when a plan comes together.
gunman 2007-12-11 ch 1,	abuseOH MY GOD! I wasn't sure how you would be writing up this crossover story, but I have to say you did a great job of it. Though you kinda threw me for a loop when you MERGED both Shinji and Optimus. That's gonna be alot of fun later. Obviously, if Shinji is going to be called back in six years to fight the Angels, then how is everyone going to react to the fact he is now a 29 foot transformable robot? He definitely won't be able to pilot the Eva. Unless you are able to create a detachable human-sized 'droid' for him to pilot the Eva. Then again, if Shinji and Optimus are now merged, just how much of each did the other get? One would assume that Optimus would be the dominant personality, being, as you say, 150 million years old. Then again, in the G1 series, if I'm not mistaken, Optimus and his Autobots crashlanded on Earth in the Ark around 4 Million BC, so you are kinda stretching the 150 million year thing. Still, it was also good to see Elita-One and other Autobots that were arriving to Earth. You had to wonder, after watching the movie just how many other Autobots were out there. I wasn't surprised to see Starscream, though I would have thought that Barricade would have shown up as well. That would have been a fight: Two lower rank Decepticons versus one leader Autobot! Also, you've got six years to play with, so try not to rush getting Shinji Prime back to Tokyo-3 any time soon. Nice story so far. Write on!
Daito-san 2007-12-11 ch 1,	abuseHmm... Have you ever saw Transformers - Masterforce? I highly recommend it for this story. (imagines red inverse-wing-geometry fighter jet mode with 4 green sensor arrays...)

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