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| let me be your w0nderwall x 2008-05-27 ch 4, | abuseI'm sorry I'm trying to get into your story but it's really hard.. because your grammar is distracting.. like when you write 'was' instead of were or 'do' instead of does. if you were to just correct that this would be a great story so far. please. i really like it.. it's just the grammer that makes it hard to get into the story. |
| Ritahomeandawayfan 2008-05-07 ch 5, | abuseOMG I hope Ruthie and Martin sort it out after he apoligizes for being a jerk. |
| madwriter23 2008-05-02 ch 5, | abuseyou should never write ever again. this was really bad. |
| Sophia-Chad 2008-04-27 ch 5, | abuseaww NO NO.. I hate Stacy & Rachel. They're **.. |
| Sophia-Chad 2008-04-21 ch 4, | abuseGreat Story, Update Soon! |
| Never Goodbye19 2008-04-14 ch 4, | abuseI like this story. Martin and Mac seem like asses right now. But I know all to well that people change around friends. Anyway I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work. |
| madwriter23 2008-04-08 ch 4, | abuseYou should write more. I wanna see what happens! Keep it up |
| Ritahomeandawayfan 2008-04-08 ch 4, | abuseLove it please continue |
| Sophia-Chad 2008-02-25 ch 3, | abuseohh thats too bad.. I liked it. I just started to read it.. |
| Hekari 2008-01-13 ch 2, | abuseSh*t! The first two chapter's were great! So, Martin thinking of Ruthie before doing the deed? lol. This story if fantastic, but i understand that sometimes we all dont get the chance to udate as much as we would like. Hope you continue this story. Looking forward to your next update. |
| neverknowwhatyourgoingtoget 2007-12-22 ch 2, | abuseI loved this chapter update please |
| Skatergirl055 2007-12-19 ch 2, | abuseI like this chp |
| hellolovelyy 2007-12-18 ch 2, | abusegtreat so far update soon! |
| Skatergirl055 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseI hope to read more soon I like the plot |
| neverknowwhatyourgoingtoget 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abuseI loved it update asap can't wait to see waht happens next |