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| JackH 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed this story. After reading it I had to ge see what Hair was. I listened to the song Aquarius and I actually enjoyed it. I was a little confused with how you finished it off. I was looking for a second page ^_^ I loved the idea and it went along quite well with the entire theme of Charlie and the Chocolate Factory. |
| Miz-Nu-Booty 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed your story, espcially since i have that song as my ringtone,,well the other half "Let the sunshine in". * warm smilz* |