Awww... that was so sad! :{ This is one of the FEW stories that I have ever had the attention span and sit to read the entire thing of... Why? because it was very very interesting and well thought-out. _ I really liked this alot, and I think I must now put it in my favorites. _ GREAT JOB! :}

hell! da 2nd. time i read it and...i'm still...i dunno...i still loved it!

i'm also thinkin' 'bout heat...

see ya,

da cutest girl in da world,

kitty-n

p.s. i can't believe you found my site...

jaja!

Hiro-kun told me where it was, Kitty-N. Since he and Strike are so close, he doesn't want to see Strike get hurt! No offense, but it had to go.

_ Seriously, I know the translations suck. I can not speak Spanish fluently yet! I hope I will be able to soon, though.

oh...! how cute!

I'm also a HEAT, Hiro & Strike SFan!

This is da 1st. time I read a fanfiction with character like that...i mean, their "bios" are SO different...with all their trouble ans that...

the only thing I would change are...those translations, I know, you said they were terrible...in fact, they're TERRIBLE...

"no sabes, esta chica latina no entendió ni una frase (porque habia palabras aisladas que aja), olvidalo, besos"

bongiorno princhipesa!

huH? forget it, I also have my little toubles right here...

see ya!,

the cutest girl in the world,

Kitty-N

p.s. how did YOU discovered my porn site?

Hey. I read the last two chapters and they were pretty good. I think my favorite part was when Hiro met Shorty up on the 17th floor. That part was kinda cute. It's still a really odd story..but it's good. The ending is ...uh... ...

Well... What can I say? That was well worth the wait. I thoroughly enjoyed Chs. 5 and 6! I was really shocked by Hiro's response to Shorty! I wasn't expecting that one. I have to admit, despite me avoiding yaoi, I really enjoyed the interactions between Hiro and Strike, and for some twisted reason, I was kind of *winces* sad that Strike didn't ultimately get what he really wanted... Either way, this was an excellent piece and I can't wait to see more of your work!

That...was...cool...dark...scary...lotta meaning...I would hate it for an

English project...I...I LUVED IT! It;s not everyday where I read yoai or

yuri cause they disturb me...but that was good! Real good! -

I think this story is really cool so far

Sorry Girl Glycerine and everybody else...Chapter 4 is about 1/2 done. Schoolwork is dragging me down _ I'm still thinking of where to go with Chapter 4, but I have the general idea...I'll get it up as soon as I can! Promise!

Ummm... when are you going to finish? I just have to know where this is going! I'm not really up on the yaoi tip, but this is really good! So, uh... come on, we need more!

omggggggg i love this story! you have to write more! i never would have thought that was the problem wow. your really surprised me with that and i loved it! although i dont like HeatxComet i can deal with it since this is such a kick ass story.

Hi, what's up? I'm being a responsible reader and writing a review. D *ahem* Whooooo yeah! This story is great! I literally enjoyed every word, unlike some other fics (ahh, not this one) where I skim over it while saying, "BOOOORING." I like how the whole story is set up-it's PERFECT for Strike's and Hiro's characters. Hiro's hacking, and the symbolism of Strike's sunglasses...aaaah! That fits so well. I can tell some people aren't gonna like what Strike was trying to do in Ch. 3, and that some other people aren't gonna like what's going on between Strike and Hiro, but it *does* seem like something they'd do when you think of it. YEAH! Can't wait to see what happens next.

I love reading stories with a ghetto-fied Strike... I let out a huge sigh of relief- Hiro was getting too close to Strike -_-;;. I have to say that the Kitty-N porn site was hilarious, I could only imagine the pink kitties in the background of it. You've got me on the edge of my seat. You are an excellent storyteller, you're descriptive and you 'hint' at things with a certain flair (Hiro & Shorty for one). Can't wait for more, highness!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! You got no idea how much I love this story! This is REALLY REALLY GOOD!

That was good! Write more! And please don't make Hiro and Strike gay or nuthin' yuck! I hate yaoi! .