Having read all your fanfics published here, I can say that this is by far the best one. It might be slightly less advanced technically, when compared to, let's say, Nobody's Fearless, it may be less regularly updated, but it's still the one that's most easily 'transferable' to the context of reality. I myself knew a lot of persons resembling Tara in many ways. I myself even acted like her on countless occasions. It's the damnation of human kind that we seem to let certain things change our complete view of the world. We all, at some point, start relating often the most banal of causes to bad things we have experienced earlier on, and miss out on what life has to offer for pure irrational fear. I love the way you made Tara open up to the gang there, but you still had to kill Hiroki, eh? :P Harhar... That makes it even more realistic. I could never get myself to understand why main character deaths are avoided in TV shows, when back here, in reality, that's what changes our 'plot' the most. Oh well, the producers/scenarists might just be plain stupid. :D I have already commenced pointless rambling, so I figure I'll stop here. Thanks for yet another fantastic piece of work.

Wow. This is a good story. I wanna know what happened! Cliffies suck. Oh well, update please!

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you always end these chapters at such inconvenient moments! i wanna know what happens!

NO! hiroki's dead TT_TT

good chapter

awesome song

sadness TT_TT

you should totally make this a trilogy!! nice chapter by the way! ^_^

wow...that chapter was very, very well done, update soon!

I like the beginning. good start.

you have to continue. end of story.
and soon?
um...O_O yeah...
kay...it's a good story line, but i think you're going a wee bit too fast...that's all...O_O kay then bye!

man she doesnt have to be that rude!