This was amazingly well-written, and a good continuation of Shadow and Lume's life together; I liked how you modernized Tamriel, bringing modern technology into the mix in Destiny Revealed and Destiny Fulfilled while still keeping the general feel of the Game Lore in Cloud Ruler Temple...

Now about the cliffhanger... are the gems really the souls of Shadow's brothers? Are you planning to write more about the Elwen people and their relationship with Cyrodiil? And are you going to continue this little series? Please? I would love to read more of this series...