WOW!that was good!pls pls pls continue!!its never too late!

...Nice. The characters were so perfectly...in character - LOL at the conflicting direction-challenged duo, Kenpachi and Yachiru! I also liked Mayuri's comment at the start, though I kind of doubt he would actually say the word '**.' I hope you're continuing with this!

Oh, I hope you're continuing this! What a beautiful beginning! The dialog and description are all paced so well, and I like where the plot is headed. Well written. Please update soon!

i'm crushed! ahehehe great opening chappei. please do continue

definitely interesting. what happens next? they're all so in-character, too.

thanks for the read.

This shows some pretty good potential.

WoW! I wanna know what happens next! Please continue!
(^3^)/

i like it. continue.

yay! I love it, its awesome! Awesomeness! Update asap!

eh!
I love ur story already
can't wait to read the rest

this sounds lke it'll be a real cool story!
update soon PLZ
thanx! :D

~black_love379

yes! i love this couple! please continue!

that was a good start will you continue it could be good well hope ya do thanx