This is just stupid...totally unrealistic as to the "custody case". You ruin a good story with such an unlikely hook.

What a horrible name you picked to give the baby.

I believe I missed this when it came out. It was fantastic. I love Fae games and you wrote all their twists and turns with such mastery! Well done.

This was good. I really enjoyed reading it

This is such a brilliant story and using A Midsummers Night Dream was a stroke of genius. The way you ended Hayden's story was really well done. While I found Karen a little to nice to Linda I liked the way you didn't make Linda into an absolute witch. Jeremy was a good touch also. Jareth was brilliant and Lady Hiver was well thought out.

Fantastic story.

Sarah would need her Equity card to work on Broadway, not her SAG card, and no way anyone is going to be able to make either a birthday present to her. They can't be bought, they're earned.

(Stands and applause) Bravo! Fantastic story. Absolutely loved it. Love your writing style. Loved your extra characters! Loved it all! Fantastic Job! (sits back in her seat and composes herself) thank you for sharing. ;)

I love that you made Linda such a good mom. Everyone else always paints her as this awful person. It's a really nice change.

I don't think I've read this story before, but I'm I'm love with it. You did a great job. And I'm not even half way thru.

Another great story Miss Paisley.

Even though this is my second time reading this story (I live your fanfictions, they are to die for), I just realized a mistake. Do you mean that you want Sarah to be enrolled by NYU (New York University)? You put NYC (New York City) a few times and it's quite confusing.

well done. i loved it:)

i don't understand, couldn't they prove Hayden's full of shit simply by making him take a paternity test?

there's no way he could get custody if there is no proof that he fathered the child.

hahaha good job Sarah! make him jealous:P