You should continue with this story, its really good! I dont think you should stop it, but you hav'nt updated in seven months...you should try to continue this story cause its a really really good plot idea so far! :)

So good!

I LOVE IT! MORE MORE MORE!

i really like it its like no other story

hi

Now that cliffhanger was just cruel!! lol. I hope this means you will update sooner now...*hint, hint* ^_^
Awesome.

Oh cool! Bella's gift is awesome. I'm so relieved she didn't drink from that human! Update soon!

I LOVE YOUR STORY

YOU NEED TO UPDATE SOON

I LOVE YOUR STORY

UPDATE FASTER THATN U DID BEFORE

IF U CAN PLZ SAY THE NAME JADE IN THE STORY I WILL LOVE YOU FOREVER

Woah! So where had Edward gone? Carlisle? I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Whoa that is very descriptive and oddly entertaining. Why was Edward wet?

Wow, you captured the grace and viciousness of hunting...Wow. You also got the horror and deisre (hers) of her first kill...Stop me if you've heard this before but...wow.
If you could just explain to me in the simplest of terms what happened when she saw Edward onwards, that would be awesome. Did Edward kill someone? Who said enough? And did Edward encourage Bella to do it? (I don't know if I phrased that right) Where did the girl come from, or is it not important? And one which you probably won't answer, but: what happens now?!
Sorry for all the questions, but it really was an awesome chapter. I liked your metaphors. Wow.
~ Melissa

I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH

U HAVN'T UPDATED IN FOREVER AND I AM GETTING MAD

U BETTER HURRY

This story is SO awesome! I agree with Greek bee. You deserve WAY more reviews for this story.

This is a really good story, a plot I've never sen before and wel written, it's such a shame that you haven't got thousands of reviews for it! I'm gonna reccomend it to everyone, so get writing a new chapter!! Lol. ^_^ Seriously though, update soon.XD
~ Melissa

Wow, this is really good. I love it. I absolutely LOVE how you incorporated how exactly Heidi rounded those people up! I must have more--more I tell you, MORE!