I like what you're doing with the chapters and the general flow of the story. you have a great plot line and the characters are believable.

This is such a lovely story. I really hope you continue it

Wonderful, I love it... But have you abandoned the fic? :( It's been since 06-15-08

you copied that first line in the descripition aboutbeing fs first frrom gilmore girls lol

Aww, now I'll have to wait for an update :[ But take your time! I really like your long chapters. They're really descriptive and they bring something new with every chapter :]

“You quit your job and bought an ice cream parlour?!”
YES ! SCORE ! xD
Sorry, overexcited. Only because your story is good though. =]
Good thing Chapter 3 is up ! I can't imagine having to wait for it .. T__T

I liked how you started it off ^^
Some people say they don't like long chapters.. maybe. or that's what I heard people complain about. But I loved it. =]

Okay, I like your fic XD That 's true I was so shocked to see that Ginny work for the Daily Prophets tsk. Anyway, Why did you follow ther plot/canon even to the smmall part (Neville and hannah) and change the fact that Luna has twins and not a girl. I know that she isn't divorce, but the fact that instead Of LYSANDRE and Lorcan she got a girl...I don't know why..

This fic is so refreshing and original--I love it! People always write AU Harry/Luna fics, and this is a very lovely canon fic. I hope you update soon!

You should update more frequently. This is an excellent fic. I like how it seems to be salvaging the vile end to the franchise where Harry got together with a character who's sole ambition in life was to be the boy who lived's whore.

Your taking the right amount of pacing in this and I am enjoying this so far. I am a bit dissappointed that Hermione is still not mentioned much. As much as Luna was a catalyst in the canon I feel Hermione would be the same here.

She would be smart enough to see through the fog here just as Luna had done before.

just a thought!

dennisud

Very through fouyndation on the lovegood side of things, wonder how this will go with all the kids now there.

dennisud

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Very sweet the whole way around, well except for Ginny. I understand her initial upset with his move, he should have consulted her, they are supposed to be a team. But his reasons which boil down to "I'll have more time for you and the kids" doesnt seem to make her happy. Does she not want him around more often? And if so why?

I like it. The story has a very satisfying tone to the whole thing in my opinion. Luna and Lacus, Harry and Ginny, and even Mrs. Longbottom...they are all fun to read in this story.

Pro: I like how you've made Luna be. Usually people don't really get her character right, either making her too mature or not mature at all. She's an adult, but she's still Luna so of course she's going to be different from the books, but at the same time she still has that vagueness and wonder about her that makes her so unique.

The characters aren't forced. I like how you made them all reasonably balanced. I was worried you'd go overboard emphasizing certain traits in Ginny and Pansy, but thankfully, you're not basically bashing them.

Con: The interaction between Harry and Ginny, while not bad, could be better. At times I get the impression that they are only married because they were supposed to be married, not because they love each other. I'm not saying for you to go all mushy, but some elements about their love could be thrown in in their interactions.

Another concern, which is what gets on me the most, is that you're making Lacus seem too normal. I realize that this may just be because many times children avoid acting like their parents many times or are embarrassed of them, but to make her try so hard and yet succeed on such a level as it is in this story, is like saying that parenting does not have that much of an effect. She grew up traveling the world so maybe a little more estrangement form her peers would be more appropriate.