it is good,but Andrea seems a little too perfect. Maybe some Claire Marek action later on? hehe. But seriously this is a good story but please add more description the story seems kinda choppy

interesting story so far. I want to see where you're going with this story. Please update again.

Don't worry, I certainly still love it!

Your characterization of the team is perfect, down to every last detail. The dialogue is great, and Andrea's fight with Stern was just top-notch!

Can't wait to read more of this story, and I'm certainly interested in reading your other story, the one centering around Marek and Claire's life. Anything involving "Timeline" is always welcome!

Once again, another chapter masterly done. It's so nice to see Andrea's reaction to the other members of the crew. She's a great girl, and she really fits into the story! It's like she was there in the movie, too.

Can't wait to see what happens when they get to ITC!

Hi there, Chocobasse!

I just read the beginning of your story, and I loved it! The beginning is lovely, and so is the characters. I instantly fell in love with Ethan, Doniger's egocentric little nephew, and the capturing girl Andrea. I'd love to read more of them and their families later on.

Please keep up the great work; I'm adding this beauty to my favourites and alerts!

Also, thank you for writing a fanfic about the movie - those jewels are quite rare. :-)

Warm regards,
TheBlueDeath