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stealacandy 2008-09-18 ch 1,	abuseI don't get it. Harry was raised by Nanny, I assume Ogg, with help from Granny,which I take to be Weatherwax, his grandfather is probably Death, and seeing as Death only had one daughter, that would mean Harry was adopted by the Stu Helits at some point. Which is in the Sto plains, so how did he make it to Lancre? And who is the Count?
FuzzyBoots 2008-09-13 ch 1,	abuseInteresting. I'd like to know where you take this. The catch, of course, is that Harry seems much more powerful than those around him, probably a virtue of the magic-rich environment he grew up in. He needs some faults as well. But, interesting and entertaining.
Tovath 2008-08-07 ch 1,	abuseInteresting, not many people can pull off Discworld stuff properly, but you seem to be managing. You will be writing more on it I hope.
Moi dix Mois 2008-07-31 ch 1,	abuseDiscworld and Harry Potter is an amazing combination. The footnote location is a bit obnoxious, but it doesn't, like, spoil the whole story. It's really interesting so far, and I really hope you update this sometime in the near future. haha
Maleehu 2008-07-22 ch 1,	abuseinteresting - very interesting:)
Catherine 2008-07-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseOk i seriously love discworld and Harry potter. This is the best combo possible. I really hope you keep writing this.
Allamonalla 2008-06-29 ch 1,	abuseYeah, the format doesn't work well with footnotes so I end up having to avoid them all together.
SomeGuyFawkes 2008-06-28 ch 1,	abuseVery interesting. The grammar's a bit rough, in spots, but the chapter did not seem to require any advance knowledge of Discworld -- which is very good. Alas, this story appears to be abandoned.
Fae Child19 2008-06-11 ch 1,	abuseI love Disc World! It rules!
almightyswot 2008-06-03 ch 1,	abuseGreebo should be there :D
Simplicity Is Bliss 2008-05-28 ch 1,	abuseSweetie, your placement of the footnotes drove me up the wall. Love the story though. :) Made me giggle. Dear Ol' Granny Weatherwax. Do pick it up again. Please?
Kasyblack 2008-05-22 ch 1,	abuseLovely thing! Poor Professor Dumbledore! Meeting with some Common Sense... it is a really terrifying thing (and learnt from Granny, even more so). Completely disorientating) Not to mention the possible meeting with boy's guardians...
Hebi R. 2008-04-28 ch 1,	abuseI agree completely about the footnotes.
rianifitria 2008-04-25 ch 1,	abuseI think this has potential (though I have no idea who is the Count -and was it Nanny Ogg?- being referred by Harry and what the content of Ron's goodbye was since it seemed related). Not very sure why the grandpa is Death and how Harry also seemed to be related to Rincewind -the luggage- since Rincewind and Death seemed to be not on the best of terms. My main problem with this story is three. One, the involvement of practically most prominent character in Discworld series. It wouldn't be easy to actually have all of them raised Harry somehow, it's just very unnatural that it's bordering improbability. Pick a character and stick with it. It would make this a lot easier. A passing acquaintances work but Rincewind and Death together? please research their relationships before you put them down on the fic. Two, pairing. I might be wrong in this, just because I saw the Hermione G and Harry P on top of this page, but it seemed to indicate a pairing of Harry and Hermione. Not to be insulting, but I'm not sure if you can pull pairing realistically. Is this story really about how a discworld raised Harry fare in England wizarding world? Or is it a romance to hook up Hermione and Harry? Because if it's the first one, then I think you have enough on your platter that you shouldn't even try tackling romance. A friendship fic between Ron and Harry -they're off to a different start- would be awesome. Meh. Couldn't care less about romance, just warning you about foreseeable difficulties. Three, a nice background on why Harry is back in England would be appreciated. It's too sudden to have Harry that has been raised in discworld without further ado or complication was back in Hogwarts. Why would he return? Plot device advancement? Try again. Solid reasoning would be good. I can't comment on your grammar or writing style cause I didn't see anything wrong with it and I'm not the best person when it comes to English language. So there.
Feline Jaye 2008-04-24 ch 1,	abuseIs discworld the ONLY cross-over here? Nice stuff, BT-dub

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